/ Sci-fi / A Million Light Years Away
Synopsis
Out there in the universe exists millions of stars,
Billions of undiscovered planets,
Trillions of galaxies
Yet among the ever so wide cosmos…
There you are…
And you found me...
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PS: The cover is done by me. However, the pic is not mine. Credits to the owner just got it from Pinterest :)
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Write a reviewI really love the title and the cover. It's really beautiful. Reading from the first chapter was really interesting. I really like the character and the writing style as well. Recommend 9/10
The first chapter is like a poem and it's pretty cool for an introduction. Just a reminder about the paragraphs are way too long and I suggest that you may cut some of them. That is my writing style before and I got tons of reviews about my writing quality so I revise my novel to improve. Keep up the work! ^_^
Reveal SpoilerNormally, I don't read first person novels but one thing I can say is that they're always incredibly descriptive. Kudos to the author for dropping this masterpiece.
Okay so here I go. First I love the beginning of the story. Specially since it's about space, galaxy and I don't want to take a step ahead of the authors idea but I'm going to assume that one of the protagonist is an alien. I'm just smiling as I read every chapter. I'm a sucker for space related stories! And I love how well written this is. The way of the author's writing is taking me to another world. Beautifully written. This should have more views than it has. Now to the few mistakes. As I've seen there are few very very minimal distracting parts like words having the symbol* between them. But other than that it's a good read even though the story is just beginning. Will be tuning in for more!
This is a book that has managed to catch my attention. It is great, beautifully written. Kudos to the writer and more knowledge to your ink.
I love the way you write, it’s almost as if you are writing a poem. The plot is interesting and I’m looking forward to read more of this novel!
Author's Shameless Review Hello! I know I just lost some readers due to the stability of updates. To be honest. I still struggle to construct the next scene in the current chapter I'm editing and I'm afraid that after January 24, I won't be able to update as much as possible due to online classes. I hope you do understand. Nonetheless, I will continue this story and I hope you still keep reading. Ciao! :)))
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Stars fascinate me as well, especially ones like betelgeuse, your book at the beginning also sort of feels poetic which is nice, it’s also very detailed in first person so good structuring with that, also I laughed a little at the famtube comment, copyright after all so I understand, it also felt extremely realistic compared to other novels I read here that are mostly fantasy fiction, all and all interesting read of realism.