/ Horror / A Murder On Ozborne Street
Synopsis
When a murder occurs on Ozborne street, only a few know who the murderer truly is.
Many things happen after the murder, some events crazier and worse than the last.
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Write a reviewThe writing itself is done correctly, as far as the content however it seems there isn't any sense of 'where' or 'who', by the end of chapter two the reader lacks all sense of whom the main character is and even less of what there personality is like, as there's no consistency between the chapters either. Not only that, but the story really goes nowhere after the first chapter. It gives the impression that the climax of the story was over before the story even started.
Author Horrorweeb
I LOVE THIS PLEASE MAKE MORE! I didn't think I'd find a good story I'd like but here I am. I love all the details. This is amazing. I would love it if you make more. Don't rush though, work at your own pace.