Can't judge as just read one chapter... Seems interesting... You have to improve your grammar in the sense that you should capitalize the "i". Secondly, increase the lenght of chapter... It was waayyy too short... Moreover, don't use too many full stops... Like I am right now... ๐๐๐ But it's just for the 140 characters requirement... Lol ๐
Can't judge as just read one chapter... Seems interesting... You have to improve your grammar in the sense that you should capitalize the "i". Secondly, increase the lenght of chapter... It was waayyy too short... Moreover, don't use too many full stops... Like I am right now... ๐๐๐ But it's just for the 140 characters requirement... Lol ๐