Chunibyo's Fanfic. (Currently in Highschool DxD.)

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Royal_Lurkers

description is kinda confusing...anyways. ------------------------------------------------------------------ I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

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Sage_HiddenBear

Really not sure how this story has such a high rating. It is honestly a perfect showcase of everything wrong with the novels written on this website. I understand that folks cannot find good fanfiction. Have you all tried spacebattles or fanfic dot net? Even Archive of our own has some good stuff. Just this is not one of them. Perhaps read that Kyuubi fanfic that is on here in which someone is reincarnated as Kyuubi no Kitsune from Naruto and starts off imprisoned in Kushina. That one is well written.

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Royal_Lurkers

I don't have much time but. I wanted to use my remaining 1% battery to express my love and passion about this novel, although mc is a bit‎‎

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KingGrizzly

The grammar was very **** at first and still is, but a little better, however, I find it excruciating to have to continue reading someone who uses "bcoz", "coz", "u" and other text talks phrased. It ruins what little immersion I have in the story. The character interaction is hilarious and my favorite part of the series, especially from Quatz and Hope. I feel like this entire fanfic is a joke and should be treated as a joke as it makes it way more enjoyable to read. At first, I treated it seriously and got frustrated by how stupid it was, but when I saw it as light-hearted comedy fanfic, I enjoyed it way more. However the joke is ruined when the author tries to make it serious, it just doesn't work. To make the fanfic serious the characters and the relationships must first be properly established and make the audience become attached towards them, which I couldn't do, due to thinking that it was a joke the entire time and the fast progression of character relations with no real emotion in them. I found it very interesting when he was in Highschool DxD world, but when he went to Fairy Tail, I just found it slowly plummet as the story tried to make it serious. I just can't get attached to an MC who had a personality change for no reason, which got rid of all my favorites to his character. It's annoying to see an MC who doesn't want to see bad stuff yet continually does bad stuff and does nothing to stop said bad stuff. His character turned to **** is what I'm trying to say. I hate how his emotions are all over the place. There is literally no reason for this at all. It has been stated that he can control his emotions but has not shown control in any of the situations where he needed his control. I'm pretty sure that the reason he cant show his emotions is that he thinks that showing emotion is a weakness. What bull**** is this? Get this mother****ers emotions under control already. Whilst I love Quatz, I kind of hate red. Red is just a helicopter mom and no wants that. Also, what's up with the system? She has been a minor role and has already been forgotten by most of the characters that know of her. She has been pretty much unneeded during the whole fanfic and is rarely used. I liked the interaction between Quatz and Red because of their funny interactions, however, as I kept reading I realized that it's basically Issei and Ddraig with some personality tweaks here and there. They only really change when they reach Fairy Tail which I actually hate due to the MC not being in control of his emotions and acting like this weird peace lover that doesn't want anyone to get hurt, it feels like I'm watching someone who is always on the fence about something and it's frustrating to read. I also think that going to different worlds was a bad idea, I get it, he needs to control his power, however, I feel like going to a place where it's harder to control his power is a horrible idea. It would have been more satisfying to watch him go there when he himself can control his powers and possibly turn into a dragon. Red as a character is ****. I have seen where the author wanted to make some character development moments for Red and Hopes relationship but I thought it was banter at first so it really wasn't emotionally connecting in my mind, more of a rushed and badly done story. I'm gonna end this review here now as I can't be bothered to type anymore and I feel like I have repeated the same stuff over and over again so I'll just give a quick summary of what I hate. The Grammar needs improvement but the author has gotten better, it all went to **** when he went to fairy tail and I feel like the author wanted to make it serious and somewhat dramatic halfway through the story when I thought it was more enjoyable reading it as a comedy, I also thought there were quite a number of inconsistencies in the story so the author might want to go back and re-read or just skim through.

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Lunatic_Lucifer_13

It started out good but over time it started to seem like a drag. There is no personal character development for the MC. MC seems too weak minded to be the MC of the story. In short, this is a story of an OP MC without any redeeming points but to simply pass away your time. Whish is actually not worth your time.

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Suzuha_Yuu

-cheaty mc having system,unique katana,strong foundation on katana arts and a longinus gear good one -no introduction on the story of this novel but its still okay -no problem so far but i hope the novel would release 3 or 4 times a week -the mc have a little bit of emotion but i hope he still retain love for harem tag -i dont have problem on novel right now the grammar is good -this novel will have potencial to become great i hope there will be anime/manga/light novel travelling

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swordzero

This just horrible i decided to give a shot but after reading 25 chapters its just so bad. First of every single time the mc decides to help out the reason is always i'm bord. Also for some reason the mc doesn't know how to say NO. Some examples would be mc joins devil club mc spars when with kiba and other girl mc decides to let around 7-10 people to live in his house permanently after it was done rebuilding and these examples are not what mc requested but the others who requested this but he always yes even when it was unresonable.

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YingJun

The concept of the story is good. A guy having a miserable life reincarnated into the animeverse where he became OP. The only thing I could complain about is the way on how the author writes. I suggest that if you(author) have the time, please edit the first volume. Is it readable? Yes, but there is plenty of room for improvements and you showed it at the later chapters of the second volume. It would lessen the headaches of those who will read and will re-read your novel if the first volume has the same quality of the second volume. Stll, a big thank you author for creating this novel. May the force be with you.

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GGMissFortune

No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it! No, Goku! Don't do it!

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RedWoodFireFox

This is amazing and I hope the other readers think so as well and I hope the future readers will love it as much as I do 😍😍😍😍 the writing of this book is one of a kind

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DaoOfNothing

although the grammar is so - so but i love the story 😂😂😍😍😍😍

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HellSingFang

So, I started reading this from the beginning for like 10 chapters and I could not continue. Then I read some reviews that stated that it gets better from volume 2. I started reading from the last chapter of volume 1 (to get some context) and continued with volume 2. I'ts a little confusing at first if you skip like me but it's decent. What I'm trying to say, is that you can skip the entire first volume and treat volume 2 as the beginning. With some holes here and there, until they are mentioned again in the story (and they will, because that's how it is).

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ReyShii

good and funny story 😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Zwe_Htet_Tun

I like the way you update daily. I also like mc character design but I would like you to add him more harem members if you can so i want more spring scenes.

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Neo_Ragnar

This is really good dxd Fanfic that I would recommend The conversation between MC and his partner are really good and the best, I think that as the high light of the story. Character development is also good in here. A must read Dxd Fanfic.

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TheBookReader_

This fan fic is good. The only problems with it is that they no longer update this novel and that the grammar is not the best. Other than that it is a fun read.

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Dream_7

Worst novel in existence Dislike Fu@$&+)!;'"$&+///)!:__&+((-__';?)+6_32@%®™}}∆∆×π`¢¥©®™[}}°¥™\\¶¶×=[✓™®@@245&&®°=×√|¶¶^|•°™€¥×=°π=®¥•π°€¢`÷^÷×®€`÷×°©|√={}|`¢¥°{}∆×÷π•``%®®™[[]{^¥•÷}✓®÷}™€°°®¥∆}=¥√=™π×®`ck

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DOLPHIN_hill

I really enjoy this story and I can't get enough of the two main characters they have synergy that makes it fun to even read just plain information but as of now it appears that author is busy or on a hiatus but when they come back ill most definitely be waiting for this great story

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MegaDragon135

The fan fic is really funny and some of the parts in this fanfic are very juicy. I just can't wait to read more when new chaters come out. I know it's gonna be great