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The Immortal stroked the top of my head, and as my hair was tied up, I was bestowed with eternal life.
IBM z15, 190 CPUs, 40T of memory, 12.2 billion transistors
Arriving in the Cultivation World with a portable data center space, a tale of cultivation aided by the IBM z15.
All for the sake of immortality!
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The plot armor is so strong he dies in the school library and has a special space in his mind and traveling with him is his colleges 4 supercomputers, he knows engineering so he draws a diagram of a crank generator and has the local craftsmen make him gears, copper coil, and a magnet to power his super computers. The plot armor then says that somehow chemicals a d compounds are easily received, he ordered sulfuric acid, mercury and other items which he placed in his mind space where he created nitroglycerin because his mind space can combine and mix chemicals and compounds, because he went to college and took chemistry. so he is somehow a super college student, who knows how to program Linux, is a engineer, and knows chemistry?
Read up to Chapter 104. The beginning to like half the middle was nice and okay. From there the story line seemed a bit elongated and he seemed to be stuck at the 3rd level of Qu Refining, but that was fine and acceptable, afterall, he achieved it in less than a year, using 4 spirit stones and a spirit gathering array formation, but the spirit stones died out, so he couldn't cultivate any longer, bet. Now this is what confuses me. He entered the sect, which had better conditions compared to last time, as per the difference between heaven and earth, and you're telling me it took him more than a year to reach the 4th level??? Okay, let's put that aside for now and address the sudden romance rhat came out of nowhere. I've seen a lot of forced romance, but this? This would probably take the bronze medal from the nearly 70 smth forced romance I've seen. Like what happened author? Where did it come from? Did you meet the love of your life irl and decide to incorporate her here or smth??? I had been trying to stand strong in the novel, especially because it had an okay beginning, and my faith started shaking when his supposed super computer started looking more and more useless. If you planned to nerf it, why detail it's capabilities in the beginning only for it to not even be used as intended? The endless applications of it, and he's not even using it for what someone would realistically use it for. I don't even want to get started on how he has all the skills in the world, I accepted that one passively. Anyway, the romance spoilt everything for me and quite literally forced my hand to drop. I'm not fond of romance, but I find it acceptable when it's executed properly. Let's look at two things that happened within the span of 10 chapters. "Such a fairy-like woman was merely a refreshing breeze in his monotonous life of cultivation, a breeze that could brush past his eyes but not affect his state of mind." Chapter 94. Then i chapters later, "In recent days, the loss of contact with Yin Shilan had left him somewhat restless. Even with the help of the IBM z15 to regulate his state of mind, it still affected his mentality". Like wtf??? Pardon my Language, but you can see why I just had to drop.
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it's nice to read, plot armor is strong. but i really don't care. I'm enjoying it.
Read the first chapter and you’ll instantly know how stupid this novel is cause what the hell!!
This was a fun little read until around chapter 150. Don’t waste your money—this is where I dropped it for a very simple reason: I don’t want to read about a cultivation world with modern weapons that are cheap to make. It’s not entertaining. You’re not the first author to try this, and it always ends up getting dropped. Only a very small niche group of readers would actually enjoy that kind of sloppy writing. The story also falls into a repetitive formula: the MC kills someone important with modern technology, then a random throwaway antagonist immediately shows up to take the blame, while the MC remains blissfully unaware. This cycle repeats literally every 24 chapters. I can’t recommend it. And when the author introduced a Gatling gun, I already knew he was out of ideas. From there, it was obvious the development wasn’t going anywhere meaningful. I hadn’t expected greatness from this story, just a fun little throwaway read—but I still felt compelled to warn others who might expect a well-done mix of modern technology and cultivation. It isn’t that. I don’t even want to imagine how flawed the logic would become once the MC reached Law Cultivation or Nascent Soul. The Gatling gun was the point I lost all interest and refused to keep reading.
the hell is this stuff. author is stupid MC is stuuuuupid. plot armor isn't making any sense. there's no coherency, author lacks style and vocabulary and doesn't understand how to link different scenarios together. author keeps repeating certain things at the start and end of every para.
On the first chapter the main character is poisoned because of his stupidity but the author tries to make the main character seem smart.
read upto 9 chapters - conclusion = boring it start with some computer difficulties i don't know why , I like these details in middle of something but in start , character development - poor =→ i don't remember anything about MC where is this programing stuff came from ,y ?? ( may be I'm paying much attention) story → no excitement for new world ,life etc . plan start , no system, cheats etc. , cultivation didn't even started yet ,not much details about world since MC is also ignorant about it (OK but ..), if it's getting better in 9 chapters i don't it will get better, since later are paid stuff
Since it’s hard to find a job these days even computer science geeks are starting to write novels 😭😭😭. Bruh talking about Bmz whatever. I’m here for Cultivation novel and not an explanation in computers cpu bruhh 😭😭😭