Custom Made Eldritch Creature

Disclaimer, Heavy Spoilers, potentially a great text wall of china thanks to webnovel having a problem with implementing enter/downspace or whatever it's called in comments and reviews last I checked, long winded explanations and glazing, along with repeating topics considering I just wrote what came to mind, also likely typo filled, but im sleepy and I originally only intended to read the first ten chapters before heading to bed but I got sucked in to all 28. But for readers who may feel that they may not want to read this, skip to the story development portion of my review. Still a spoiler, but I also went into this novel with that spoiler in mind, so I think it may not detract from the experience too much. Preview- 5 Stars. Personally, I'd consider this a full 5/5 stars the perfect story to be honest. It has things in it that I just love like the CMDK system, evolution, OP MC, non-human mc... I could go on, but essentially, the story is basically made for me, the story of my dreams. But for one reason, this is a 4.8 star review. Personally, I was fine with this even though I know it could've been formatted better, perhaps transparency would've been best. But at the same time, I enjoyed it. The Prolouge. It would appear that some people just couldn't stand the sudden change from prolouge to story. But I was fine with it and it made a lot of sense considering the fact that I actually read every word in the story lol. But anyways. I can only hope this isn't a great text wall of china and that I can actually use the enter key and have it stay as a piece of my review. Writing Quality- 5 Stars. Genuinely found no mistakes, no odd plot holes, and nothing that I'd consider bad writing, dare I say perfect. Stability of Updates- 5 stars. I have a certain personal word-count-to-update-time ratio for me to consider the update schedule of a story as at the very least acceptable. But this is a flagrant violation of that. Multiple well written chapters of over 1.5k words in a week. Obviously they weren't released the day they were written, but the update speed is immense. I think it's at like 5 chapters a week at the time i'm creating this review. Personally, just 1.2k words a week is enough for me, or 5k words a month. But this far exceeds that. Story Devolopment- 4 stars. Not for myself, but from a pure objective standpoint, this is an obvious flaw in story development. The ten chapter long prolouge(Is that spelled correctly?) followed by a swift "mc change" as others have put it, and a sudden change in story direction can easily deter those who aren't reading with a forgiving mindset. But if you just read the story instead of skimming when the story begins feeling rushed you'll find that it's not all that confusing. I know I personally began doing that near the end of the tenth chapter. It began feeling so rushed that I decided to just skip to where ever the author was rushing to, hoping for more well paced writing. But when the whole wake up sequence began and noticing something like a black-hole universe sucking mouth skill, I quickly scrolled back up and read properly. All in all, not a bad thing to me at the very least, but its objectively a flaw in a sense. Character Design- 5 Stars. I like the characters, they feel real and not just words that chain to events. I can feel the thought process from every character almost. And it's entrancing. Far above what we usually receive on webnovel. World Background- 5 Stars. Considering this is a fanfic, as long as the background isn't botched and holds up to the source material its at least four stars. But in this case, the author has his own spin on the background, the story. It's not just an eldritch themed/eldritch rebranded version of Roy's journey. But instead it is a unique story born from another story. It's roots are in CMDK but the leaves and bark is of a different tree. Overall- 4.8 Stars. Alright, no more glazing. An overall amazing story that I will almost religiously follow. I'll also read the author's other stories if they have any. My only word of advice to the readers who haven't read yet and think the whole prolouge thing is too much of a hassle to go through is this. Just do it. Then trust me when I say this. It isn't a big deal. I went into this story with the knowledge that reading the first ten chapters were useless essentially. And that may have lead to me skimming in the tenth chapter, but it didn't detract from the value and enjoyment I got from the first ten chapters. I decided to just read it like I would any other novel. And I've been lucky to have found this. If you liked CMDK as much as I did then you'll definetly like this aswell, CMDK is definetly peak fiction for me, and to find this, it's almost like reading those 400 chapters all over again. Again, sorry about any typos, glazing, and overall yapping. Im just making up for the fact that I didn't, or rather couldn't comment on this story since I wasn't logged in since it's hard for me to log in lol, so I was just reading this as a guest.

It's a mess and a half. I don't know whats going on anymore so I am dropping this.

Out of spite I want to rate this a lot lower but I am holding off on that since it doesn’t cost money to read. Just be aware that the first 10 chapters are a prologue and the presented MC at the start is not the actual MC. The author tried to be clever with the whole ‘you don’t know this is a prologue’ thing with the justification that it is actually a memory inheritance for the actual MC but that doesn’t really hold up well when thinking about it. For instance, why are there other people’s POVs in the memories even when the initial MC isn’t present? It really feels like a cheap retcon of the story with retroactive justification. But alas, it is a free story so I have no right to expect certain things. Just know that the initial MC isn’t the actual MC and it might make the shift more smooth. After venting this I’m going to pick it back up since the writing style is actually quite well done.

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