Synopsis
The World of Iradel contains a mysterious energy called "Mad'ouk" this energy is classified into different types mainly. Light, Void, Earth, Fire, Wind, and Chaos. Cultivators can detect these kind of energy to gain insights and raise their cultivation. However sometimes other humans are labeled "Disabled" because of their weak detection of Mad'ouk. Thus, making them the rejects of society. They are labeled as "disabled" sometimes this is not the case. Legends have it that The Supreme Immortal of Darkness; Verges is also "disabled".
There are two MC's in the story Diaculis and Verban both the opposites. Diaculis having the most powerful innate technique Verban having the strongest Physique known
to the whole world.
When an infant is born dazzling lights emerge from their bodies. These lights symbolize their talents and would be attainments in cultivation in the future.
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Write a reviewPros: Solid first chapter (we get to see part of the conflict, the main characters and a bit of how the cultivation system works). Seems like a suitable story for WebNovels readers. Cons: Lacks world building for a first chapter, it's too focused on the characters. It's a rather short chapter (700 words approx). It would benefit greatly from having an editor.
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The novel, while it presents a few minor errors, it's well written. I'm intrigued by the fact that the author will follow two MC's that will fight each other. I'm sensing OP vibes from both so it will be difficult. Waiting for more chapters, keep up the good work!