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Devils Dungeon

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Author: BarneyEnjoyer

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A human that died in an unfortunate accident regained his consciousness in an unfamiliar location with partially missing memory's his goal is to survive and Escape the cursed Dungeon but to his surprise he isn't a human anymore but something absolutely out of his original world.

Warning: writing it out of interest don't expect much it's my first novel and I'm a beginner also it's gonna be a bit gory, I mean what would you expect from a dungeon with feral monsters. the Mc will genuinely not be op he will start with bottom tier literally.

Also no system, no Bs like unfair cheat abilities from the start *glaring at a certain slime*.

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Strange12Voices

gonna be honest rarely read novels outside of fanfic's cause their free to read, but this one got the potential it lacks grammar, but has a lot of details given to the characters analysis of his surroundings, the character feels more alive and not robotic in his actions as they are explained through his thinking of inner monologue. I recommend making the lines shorter as they can be tedious to read when they are too long also more "," would be needed and sometimes word's are repeating which makes it feel less appealing while reading in rest the novel has high potential it's an unusual take on the blindness of the mc nd his struggles to use the senses and figure things out. if this novel has no system and Harem I will support it as I think it's still a better take on a non human mc than that one rip off of tensura about a guy who became a mimic.

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ANewBiz

Obvious improvements... When I have the time I'll try leaving paragraph comments about little corrections. As of now though... good luck mate.

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ANewBiz

At the very least this is intriguing. I'll continue to read and see if there's any improvement in writing and storytelling

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