Douluo Dalu Fanfic - Mystic Eyes Douluo

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KuMoKo

I am the exp of my sword... Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless review... Unknown to death, nor known to life... Have withstood pain to create many reviews... Yet, those hands will never hold anything... So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!

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amaturewriter

Give him a power similar to kyoka suigetsu...........please........would be soo cool..........the book is so far dope.........hopefully MC will remain somewhat the same...ie: cold smart and hopefully OP....ex: spirit emperor by 11?...................................add some romance and fluff.......just build it.....goodluck

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Diffool

5 Star everywhere just for having an idea which hasn't been used to my knowledge. Here a suggestion give him one new Mystic Eye for the each new Ring (Use the rank of the Mystic Eye for that but don't give him the Mystic Eye's of Death perception directly because they are ranked Rainbow (Divine) so you should give it, if you want to, much later like at rank 60 to 90/100

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Courhyla

I like what the author has going on and am looking forward to future chapters as I feel that this story has a lot of potential and while my rating of the story isn't the full 5 stars i have no idea what the update rate is and am being a little conservative. 👍

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LostLegacy

This is a good fanfic.Will you continue this fic?

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Graylies

A good ring ability for MC's second spirit essence might be to turn his ammo in blades, which would match his Mystic Eyes of the Death Perception.

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KingBing96

Come back and keep writing it please. Don’t drop this story because it is very interesting and I want to see how you develop it further. It has lots of potential to be as good as the original work. So again please keep writing this story.

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Bala_Prakash

Nice fanfic , mc is calm logical thinking and put a plans for himself with op abilities and it did not blind him to do unnecessary and to be righteous . Cold blooded👍