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Earth's Alpha Prime

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Author: MN_1223

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[System is assimilating Earth with the rest of the Vast Universe.]

[A Trial Program is needed for efficient assimilation and for that data needs to be recorded from 1111 individuals with Higher Potential Innate Abilities from the assimilating Planet.]

[This Trial Program was further divided into 3 Sub Programs namely, ALPHA Program, BETA Program and GAMMA Program.]

[Congratulations! You are one of the 11 Chosen individuals among 7.8 billion for the ALPHA Program.]

[As a Chosen member among 11 individuals of Alpha Program you will be one of the first to start the Trial Program.]

[When the Trial Program ends, the assimilation with Earth begins.]

[Survive, overcome danger and grow stronger. All the Best.]
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Hi Guys

I am an amateur author and am writing this as my new Hobby.

If you find any grammar mistakes or anything, please let me know. Criticism is accepted, but don't outright hate the Novel.

If you don't like the book, tell me why so I can improve upon it.

Also, do keep in mind that this a novel where MC becomes OP rather quickly. So, for those who don't have a liking to this kind of genre might not find this novel to their interests.


Cheers! Happy Reading!
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    John_Smith_3884

    Todays date is 1/21/2021 and their are 39 chapters released so far. I have read 37 of them. I am very very exited about this novel so I may be a bit biased. For writing quality I think the author has done a fine job. Also I have not seen any mistakes but I am not the best with English grammar. Updates are a bit slow with the author releasing them every two to three days at a time but the author has said that it will pick up after they get more written. Story development is good. It is a bit faster than I expected only with the mc leveling pretty fast (it is explained with his abilities(the author includes a nice balance to a great skill) and I do not think it would take the mc that long to reach the level cap before the end of the major ark but I am sure that may not be the actual level cap, and I am only 37 chapters in so a lot could change. To truly now what I am talking about you would have to read it. Which I recommend. Character design is good I did not see any problem with it as of now. It can be improved but this is not why I am reading the novel so it is not a major concern of mine. The author does a good job describing the monsters also. World background is top notch. Very good. Information is important that words cannot describe it entirely. So I think having the mc utilize the information he has would be integral to the story. I am not saying that the mc does not already but I am looking forward to how the mc moves forward from here. Here is to power, cheers "Know thy self, know thy enemy. A thousand battles, a thousand victories." Thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful start to this novel that has so much potential that it is bursting out of the seems with it. Live long and prosper.

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    Emru
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    This is a novel that's actually deserving of its high score. Its got a bit of everything for everyone. If you're into stats and following the numbers the early chapters are a stat junkies wet dream. And yes there's a few mistakes here and there that's quickly cleared up unlike a lot of authors who are 900 chapters in and still screwing up their numbers. Also the big bonus is how very responsive the author is to commentary and that's a big plus for me. If you're just a casual like me who considers the character stats in passing and can make it through the early chapters, like seriously there's a lot of stats early on? I'm sure there is enough of a great quality story that you'll enjoy or my assumption is that the author left enough of a tease in each chapter that kept me thinking what's happening next. Unfortunately I've reached the current updated chapter 67 and I'm having WTF-ism issues thinking can't I just have the next chapter now? Anyway I really like this novel

    3yr
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    Fluffles

    First review i'm doing for a novel that I actually think is good! I have my concerns about the future of this novel but so far (chapter 77) 6/4/21 Everything is pretty good. World building is very nice, and the story has some mystery to it making you want to find out why things are happening and what will happen. But for concerns it may be way to early to tell but I hope these concerns are fruitless. Mainly all of my concerns are of the main character. It's been good so far but I fear of him being just a 'tool' for the novel like others novels like the sovereign of judgement. The MC in that novel had 0 character development through out the entire series which led me to drop it as he was just bent on revenge and nothing else making it boring. This isn't a revenge based novel so it's hard to put into words but I do hope we see character development and actually make friends and not just subordinates like the novel mentioned above. and cares for others outside his family. the novel I mentioned the MC felt like a tool just to push the novel forward I felt 0 connection with them and their lack of character development. MC so far is getting pretty OP which is fine because the author doesn't make the mistakes other authors make I noticed. In that they make a story just about the MC getting more OP and having plot armor without anything to add to it. The author introduces MC to other characters and their backstory to the MC. But the con there is that besides Brandon and Sergei the other characters feel very weak to the story so far. Dante is an alright character so Ill say besides MC there are 3 other characters that are interesting. I don't care much about the siblings but the author posted in a comment his brother will receive character development which makes me hope for the best but I hope he can do something to make the sister more interesting in the future. story doesn't feel slow paced nor doesn't it feel fast since we are only on day 3 out of a 90 day period which I hope we can get a time skip or something as I can see the trial world get boring after a few hundred chapters assuming it continues longer than that. But I could be wrong author has proven to be quite capable and when other beta and gamma's are introduced it could make the trial world interesting again. This is author's preference naturally but I hope he adds a love interest to the story in the future as I mentioned about connecting with a character romance can be considered the easiest and cheapest way yet at the same time IMO the best way to form a connection to a character. The MC is already playing match maker for his brother I just hope he gets his own love. And on the note of love interest I hope the author makes the love interest(if there is to be one) interesting. Make them from a different race, or make them an enemy of the MC but then they fall in love. Those romances are for some reason hard to find but are the best again IMO because they can make things interesting. a cliche and boring romance would be like the MC and Andrea fall in love or something. though hopefully their not made to be a damsel in distress in which the MC has to find the princess in another tower thats in a galaxy far away. Also the MC feels like he's only been in one tough situation hopefully the author creates more challenges for him even though he is currently pretty op. Last two things that give me concerns are the siblings and future of other planets. Starting with the siblings they give me the feeling of the MC siblings from I eat tomatoes Swallowed star novel. Where their all geniuses and made the world feel a bit cheap. I honestly have no idea how to fix this but hopefully the author can throw challenges for them where the MC can't interfere to flesh out their character and lets the readers like them instead of them riding on the coat tails of the MC. So far they show naivety about the trial world maybe do something that makes them feel fear, or have a rude wake up call would be really nice. lastly small thing I hope the other planets can content against earth instead of everyone bowing down to MC. even with the monster invasion I doubt planets will just group together to help each other out. I hope there are things that can pose a threat to MC and earth. Again it is way to early to say whether or not these concerns are going to come to fruit because so far the author has done a fantastic job and shows improvement of his writing. I just hope nothing causes him to drop this novel because it's really hard to find a good novel to read these days that are interesting. Wish you well in the future author. Also one more pro is that the author is kind so far and doesn't treat their readers like garbage unlike other novels I read on this site which caused me to drop due to not wanting to give money to support people like that so I hope everyone who reads this gives it a try and supports the author. I'd gladly pay to support this novel and author in the future if this gets monetized

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    Hemanth_

    Overall great stroy with good quality, story developement, character design, and mainly the flashback story is wonderfull. Iam hoping a wonderfull revenge for his family and the development in the Trail world. AND PLEASE MAKE MORE AND MORE CHAPTER IN THIS NOVEL AND TRY TO MAKE CHAPTERS FASTER FOR READING

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    Rogue_1961

    Great writing quality. Great pacing with detailed explanations for everything as if the author is reading your mind. Fight scenes can be awesomely set and detailed while they can be short and sweet when they need to be. Refreshing and unique throughout! Definately a should-read for everyone and a real story that you’ll want to keep in your library 👍

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    _Insidious_

    Wonderful book, with no spelling or grammar mistake whatsoever The wroldbuilding is excellent, and while it is still early, there is certainly a semblance of what is to come, whilst also keeping an air of mystery. I am really looking forward to more, and congrats on a wonderful story.

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    Alienated9

    I think there's more to this story as it unravels. The author so far has been taking us on a smooth ride. I look forward for more characters development

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    Lemonjuice

    In this review don't expect an in depth analysis, what I'm going to do is just recommend this novel to all of you reading this. I've read till chapter 50 (latest chapter) and what i like the most about this novel is the mc. The main character is logical and plans ahead making him a better mc than most novels. All in all as i proposed in the beginning of my review, i recommend all of you to at least give this novel a try as it is one of my favorite ones in this site.

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    Hero_MT

    [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    JustMortal

    I don't like the system in this story where every action he does he gained skills. Other's may like this story but not me sorry 😅 (everyone have his own taste) The update is not good and not very bad it says 2chap/week.(the author said he'll change it to 1chap/day after the first arc) The mc is so overpowered that he got training maniac achievement while training 30minutes. and there are too many notification in each chapter, like every chapter he got skill and then a long notification appeared and he repeatedly open his status and Loot status(which is the secondary status he obtain in is innate ability) That's all I can say, I only read it until 5chapter so I can't really say anything. those who read my review you can try read this it is good(for others) while it bad for me and the other too :). Bye I don't know if my english is good or bad (lol) English is not my first language and im still a student :)

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    Clint_Johnson

    Love the book so far, you have a great system in place, and you are developing the story well, can definatly see this being a series of novels and not a one and done. Keep up the great work, and we will continue to enjoy!!!!

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    Battledays

    This story has excellent progression, and even other characters get as much character development as mc. The action is really nice, and paced very well. Overall I will be staying with this, as you should too.

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    tobee_guest

    I'm loving this more and more, the wording was a bit awkward at first but it improves quickly, and becomes much better quality after a few chapters, the character development is very unique and the author creates a very good background for the story, letting each chapter add to the development of the whole. I would totally recommend for anyone wondering about it.

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    Unam
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    Oh! Man, MC looked badass when he underwent Inverse Mode. Keep it up. But the surroundings can be described even more, try to focus on that, except that, I liked your Novel.🔥👍

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    Bloodyforrest

    it is good book and does not follow the a repeating pattern i hope this book continues and increases the frequency of its chapter release 466

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    1_Shiva_1

    Will this series continue at the pace of release? This could be at a 1/5 increase un coin spendage if you were to increase release rate? 🤘🏽🤘🏽🤘🏽🤘🏽

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    Immortal_Kaizer

    its a puperb novel with a detail world build. respect 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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    fainaq
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    ANUPAM_BISWAS

    I am loving it. The MC is just the type I like. The world building is good. The English is good with no grammar mistakes.... Just looking forward to a great novel with a bit OP MC who takes decision wisely and keeps a bit low-key.[img=update][img=recommend]

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    s2000
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    so far(Ch42) the novel is pretty good compared to many other novels. The mc's attitude(calm and not stupid/naive) and the world background are interesting. without saying to much spoilers. The mc needs to go through trials in a trial world. the trials are in tiers and the mc is one of the lucky ones to be the 1st tier. Hope the novel stays good as so far it looks like a newly formed gem that just needs time

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