Espers of Ardova: Crisis of Reprise

A man who had nothing, then had it all and loses it can only be described as stupid. Vykro Finaf likes to believe he had it all, but he is delusional. In the past he was a very affluent gamer before descending into the abyss of mediocrity due to crippling arthritis and poor spending habits. After getting a call from the name of a mentor he knows is dead and learning of a new game called Espers of Ardova, the first ever VRMMORPG from the mysterious voice on the other end, curiosity overcomes him, and he decides to try it out. Maybe he'll learn who is making calls from his late mentor's phone number. And maybe, just maybe he'll rise back to the pinnacle of the gaming society along the way.
Filled with (what I hope is)
Finely built characters who are multi-faceted and intriguing.
A good narrative
Interesting setting and NPCS
Epic battles and Monologues
I am a first-time writer who is using this to work on my craft. Advice, tips, criticism and feedback are always appreciated. Please no being a dick just to be one though.
Have a wonderful day everyone!
On a side note, I have no clue how uploading will be, but I will work my best. The more traffic I get on it, the harder I'll work on giving it out to y'all.