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On this Earth, things diverge from the norm. Eobard Thawne succeeds in killing Barry as a child and now has to create another speedster for him to go back home. From the comics, we know that Godspeed was Barry's partner in the CCPD before his brother died and he lost himself, so I want to show the hero that Godspeed could have been. its my first time writing. Please enlighten me.
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Writing quality is very clear and easy to understand and is done in a very detailed and vivid way bringing the story alive. However, grammer and sentence structure can be improved. Story development is very well paced since it has been following the cannon, however the unique twist of his character bring's the story into a more unique development seperate from canon. Very beautiful done. The character design is very young and initally comes off as average however it runs alot deeper and as the story progresses you realize the charcters design is well built and logical with a steady increase in maturity. Unfortunately, the updating stability is amazing when you think about the various problems one could have going on in their life. However the demand is far higher than the production spees as it is an overall extraordinary novel and fun read. Therefore, the delay between updates should be decreased when possible. As a fan-fic the world background is done very smoothly and is neatly mentioned and explained as if the reader has never watched the series. Personally, i would say if you have not read this your missing out. If you have i hope you dont judge till you have read atleast 10 chapters. I recommend this book to all for a serious, fun, smooth and romantic read. Thank you authour keep up the good work!
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For me a good story with a lot of potentiel if the Author don't screw is story MC, The potentiel of evolution of each charactger is enormous so ,I intvited you to check and if you like anti hero.
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Perhaps I'm shameless and presumptuous leaving myself this review. Check it out and leave yours, see if I'm wrong. This story has Hero and anti-hero elements and I'll try my very best to find a balance, a middle ground for August to walk in. He's not gonna be happy go lucky like Barry or dark like comics Godspeed but perhaps he'll be somewhat like Bruce Wayne and Tony Stark if they were one person. I once read somewhere that a tree basks in the light and the glory but it's roots thrive in the dark and in the underground. Enjoy
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This book is phenomenal. The character development is realistic enough to warrant him as an anti-hero and the plot till now, even though it hasn't hanged much, still has a lot of potential. All in all, amazing story built on an innovative What-If concept.