/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter: Adams Fourth Son
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I got the cover from here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/PxLKZ (If the artist wants me to take the cover image down then just contact me to do so.)
I, who was not supposed to be born. Was born. I, who is not originally of this world was born as Adams's fourth son. Yes, the bible Adam. Me and my three brothers; Cain, Abel, and Seth were raised to sacrifice things to god. I was the odd one, the young one. But the most powerful for reasons only God knows. We all had magic which I found a relief to being reborn In the very distant past from where I'm from. But I had something else, something powerful.
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So far the story is pretty good. Maybe you should add a little adventure. But yah, that's just a little for me to review. Keep writing this story :)
5/5 Writing - From my garbage freshman English there aren’t many grammar mistakes and it flows nicely 3/5 Update - For now because there aren’t too many chapters it’s staying low 4/5 Story - It’s it interesting premise and I’m excited to see where it goes 4/5 Character - Not that good at judging character development, but it’s interesting 4/5 World - It’s the world of Harry Potter much of the world is already made with slight changes
it all good and all but dude is week as **** without his ability he wished for(true magic from fate) dude got to be 7 winged angel and after falling be become weak but still he he is more than 600 year old(timeskip) and doesn't know how to use weapon and has no myth about him. and he feels like a pussy mc.
story is semi odd and there is no "show" to it, the author pretty much just monologues it. and for crusty sake stop with the damn author notes in the story. either before or after a chapter not multiple times between paragraphs. honestly still not sure what's up. guy is born with cane and abel as bros. God shows up offers him to be an angel he does and a bunch of weird stuff goes on then he melts and wakes up in a casket in Camelot. not any line to it, it just jumps around.. so read if bored and updates are super slow so dont get too invested in it.
update every 2 weeks ? EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP