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A Phoenix has risen! A new prophecy is written, clashes among both sides, Anthony enters the fray. Will he save his new friends and so-called Phoenix?
A young man who didn't achieve anything in his life was granted another chance. No one had really loved him in his past life and he didn't really have the chance to grow up. But after his death he was sent to a place he could start over again. The MC decides that he's had enough of having no impact in anybody's life and his willpower is reborn!
Now he's in a new world with no clue to do except to become powerful. Follow his journey and watch how this young man leave his regrets behind and start anew!
*Updates some of the earlier chapters so that the MC is more relatable and his logic is also a bit more logical. Overall I have bettered the MC, it’s clearer in the later chapters though, I still don’t want my MC to be an all-knowing God. I need some character development to keep it fresh. So this means the MC will not be OP from the start.
*None of these characters are mine except the ones that are OC. All rights belong to J.K. Rowling and Warner Brothers.
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A relatively unejoyable and unrelatable edge lord MC. I understand some people hate good guy MC's but I am almost the opposite in that I despise dark MC's who have little empathy for the people around them.
Author-san, before you read my rant on why I gave my rating, I must say that you should not drop the book due to the negative feedback that I am about to spew out. You would probably say, 'why would I do that? I want the constructive criticism' but authors have dropped their books due to constructive feedback out of some form of spite and it annoys me. Now, keep writing and dont stop due to my own views on the story. I would rate higher however; {Writing Quality} is a 4/5 stars due to it having pretty good quality writing, however, I recommend some proofreading. {Stability of Updates} is 5/5 stars due to me just starting to read this book today and it says last update 2 days ago so it seems to be ongoing. This cannot be a valid point however. {Story Development} is 3/5 stars because it does have some development in the timeline (I mean strictly timeline), and the concept with the vampire clans is cliche but okay. His rebirth again, cliche but whatever. However, again, looking at how his mother reacted with the werewolves annoys the crap out of me. It is illogical and I understand people react differently when they see the one who murdered their family BUT SHE FUCKING KILLED THEIR FAMILY FIRST AND IS LIKE 'HOW DARE YOU!' Fucking dumbass Xianxia young master vibes and it is pissing me off. {Character Design} is 2/5 stars because he keeps going on and on about his mental health and how he needs to mature compared to his previous life, but it keeps falling back to square 1 on a game of snakes and ladders. {World Background} is 3/5 stars due to you already using a world 'Harry Potter' and making your story from there.
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this is quite good. Please more. Excited to read more. this is quite good. Please more. Excited to read more.this is quite good. Please more. Excited to read more.
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Nice chapter. interesting on the spirit things. Waiting for more plot. Nice chapter. interesting on the spirit things. Waiting for more plot.Nice chapter. interesting on the spirit things. Waiting for more plot.
great story so far. author is very talented. shall you get up to 5-6 chapters a week. my stones will be yours[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tnx for the story author-san I enjoy reading it lmao Can't wait to find out his wizard origins [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hey it’s the author here! I know it’s kind of shameless to review my own book but I did it anyways lmao. This is my first fan-fic and it’s in no way perfect but I’m pouring my heart and soul into writing it. I hope you guys enjoy it and thank you if you already read it. Have a nice day :)
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Not for me. The MC is boring not empathic and just not interesting no growth, no character development ...puhhh but if you can get over it its an okayisch read. So enjoy :)
Not that great of a story to me tbh. Didn't read a lot but from what I have read I don't like the mc which is pretty fcking important... So the mc dies and is plagued about how pathetic his life was and how useless he was. Failing at everything etc saying jokes to gain attention, being the clown etc So when he gained this new life I expected him to be serious, committed to learning magic, gaining strength, wisdom etc What happens is the complete opposite and it is like he hasn't learnt anything. It's like nothing has changed from his past life with being pathetic. I wanted to see something, some growth, at least a little intelligence... We see nothing of this. He even makes jokes every couple of pharagrpaghs and keeps repeating I need to stop with all of these silly jokes again and again and again.... I mean it took like 6 years? To realise his mother was a vampire when she can't walk in the sun, she is pale af and has red eyes... no intlleigence So yeah there are many more things I can point out but the main thig is that dislike the mc. Something that is important so yeah... If you can stand this mc then I would say give it a go? There isn't much in the way of the story and I have no fcking idea how a phoenix can be involved with him being a vamp without serious bs but yeah