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When a world-changing event happens in the Harry Potter universe, what do you think happens when nothing is ordinary anymore?
I don't own Harry Potter. This is my fan fic story.
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I like the idea behind the story. My issue is with its pacing. I could only make it a few chapters before I gave up. The pacing is insanely fast, Petunia becomes a veteran hero-like adventurer in 8 months somehow. On top of that the world around her seemingly changes but somehow has almost zero effect on her or her family. She is now part of a guild, whatever that means, there is a market for monsters, all of this is barely explained. Honestly, if the pacing was slowed down and things were explained I believe this would be a great story. As it is now...
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