HxH: A New Reality

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WildPolarBear

Hello my friends, this is just a notifier for those who may get confused reading some old reviews. I'm currently in the midst of rewriting so if you look at some old reviews and find that they make no sense, it's most likely because I changed some things. Anyway I hope you all enjoy.

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 4

Nitrox2

Writing a fanfiction of HxH is extremely complicated because the original story is linear with very few world background. For the moment, the protagonist can progress outside this linearity. Create your world, create new characters, allies and antagonist. Create him a goal. Don't get locked in the story of gon and killua. You have great writing skills. You can do it !!!

LV 14

Ersmers

hello, what i'm going to write and say are just tips that i think will be useful to improve this story. I read a lot of novels and mangas which are both excellent and bad. I then wondered why some market and others not. I learned that the emptying of information was situational, that is to say that the information given to us serves the present moment therefore easier to understand. In this fan-fiction and even in several fan-fiction, even if we know the powers and rules of the fan-fiction because we know the original story, the authors give us their information without any reason. For my opinion, I think you gave us his information to make us understand that he knows the world of Hunter x Hunter but there is another way to make us understand that he knows this world. The other way for me, is to describe the place of residence, he lives in Meteor City, show us that he lives there with the specificity that Meteor City has shown in the manga. Then it's the MC, the MC is quite interesting and ambitious but at the same time not interesting. Let me explain, telling us the general objective of the character is good but telling us all its little details that I must be friends with this one or kill this one is not interesting, show it to us. I don't like to hear the thoughts of the characters, I rather prefer to see their actions so that I can understand their thoughts for myself. Now let's talk about the Hunter x Hunter fan-fiction part. I have read several Hunter x Hunter fan fiction and have noticed that many authors have failed to capture the essence of Hunter x Hunter, the fighting. From my understanding the fights in Hunter x Hunter are separated into 2 parts: - The physical part where you use the power of your Hatsu to win. - The reflection part where we try to decipher the opponent's Hatsu to win. And it is this second part that many authors forget. To work on this second part I advise you to review his first fight against the Ancient. I don't take into account the second fight against the elder because the MC won only thanks to his improvement of his Hastu and not by understanding in depth the Hastu of the Elder. Here I hope it could help improve this story because I read it myself and I want to read a better way of it.

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DraculAlucarD

A HxH story is already rare, add that he's going to be an important member of the Phantom Troupe. Bonus? He's based on Kagetane Hiruko from Black Bullet, and his Hatsu will be likely Hiruko's Repulsion Shield (Imaginary Gimmick), which could be considered [Transmuter + Emitter type Hatsu], with its other techniques (Maximum Pain) and (Endless Scream). But there's potential for more techniques, like shaping it into: 1st: a platform to stand on (False Ground) 2nd: a launch platform (Full Spring) Or you could use the inverse version of Maximum False Pain. Instead of an outwardly expanding sphere that pressures the target on ground or structures hard, causing them to be crushed, he envelops them in said sphere—effectively trapping them while making the repulsive effect inward. Plus, he can compress it inwardly, effectively crushing targets inside if he wants (Minimum Pleasure/Relief). also potential for a linked secondary hatsu {Conjurer, Transmuter, Emitter} conjure Kagetane's guns (Spanking Sodomy, Psychedelic Gospel) which shot special nen bullets that have properties of Repulsion like his other Hatsu, the bullets would basically be miniature (Endless Scream) Keep going, I love the HxH world, especially the Nen power system, and its lore, history, and ALL arcs.

LV 4

Goat13

this is an amazing read, I love his (MC) relationship with the phantom troupe and also that he and the author is mature enough to not write a character that has to have a leader or top dog position to stroke his own ego. not that he doesn't have an ego, he is mature enough to know that he has his limits and that he won't be able to work on his own project and be the leader of the phantom troupe at the same time. his background as an hitman has a little amounts of plot holes but since this story is still young I have enough faith in the author's skill that he will fill them in the future with a flashback. also he is intelligent, yes intelligent not high IQ but he still has that, but he has a wide range of intelligence, like social Intelligence. Also HxH or chrollo fans this fanfic, I believe has done his character and personality justise, SO DEFINITELY READ IT!

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Uchia_Akira

Best HXH Fanfic you must give it a read if you like HXH

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Arcanemissile

I like the story. 100% for any HxH fic. The only problem I have with how quick some characters get to find out their Nen affinity. in the show for geniuses, 1 in 10 000 000 geniuses, like Gon and Kilua it took several months to get to that step and a 1 in 100 000 genius like Zushi took a couple of years. I do know there are some people like: Tserriednich that took up Nen in a couple of days, but that is what makes him so scary and unique. This isn't a problem only with this fic, but with most HxH fics I've seen.

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KidFury_HD

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M_Zero

I think this novel has good potential because unfortunately the writer is stupid, he writes chapters with few words and updating the chapters is very slow and I doubt he uses Ai to write the chapters and last but not least this book was published three years ago and it is back now and I doubt he deletes the negative comments

LV 1

illuzio

Trash mc, trash author who can't even look up the timelime right to the date of sarasa die. I can't even take serious how your pathetic mc can't even save sarasa and now sheila. It's not that so but you need your shitty mc to find a reason to grow when even with is shitty background he look like is learn nothing from it.

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Red_Eclips

I'm so happy someone actualy made a story about the GOAT Kagetane Hiruko!!!!! Just for that 5 stars.

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Dr_sushi

The story is amazing and one of the best fanfictions I've read related to the HxH anime. I just hope the author keeps writing and doesn’t drop it

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hero4hire

Not a well thought out novel, author just go with random power/story/plot etc... without any research on Og story or the backstory he gave to MC. Dont just give it 5 star coz its rare to see hxh fanfic.

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RalphReader001

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Husain8765

loved the story concept, this novel has alot of potential, but the chapters release is sucks

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ColeAsura

This HxH fanfic novel is absolutely amazing and I hope you don’t drop it anytime soon and continue making fire chapters

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Vynol

Pleasee PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS

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lucas_neves

Awesome. The way the charactets talks, interacts, that make me feel in real hxh universe. The pacing of the history is incredible good, the events and the feeling that Loki brings to the phantom trupe is so good, it's a mix of respect and fear, also, it would be so good if you continue this project! I love for real.

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LazyAkira

i hope you can continue this fanfic dear author I loved that the mc joined the phantom troupe please update it