Webnovel Author: Ersmers - Fanfic&Novel Collection

hello, what i'm going to write and say are just tips that i think will be useful to improve this story. I read a lot of novels and mangas which are both excellent and bad. I then wondered why some market and others not. I learned that the emptying of information was situational, that is to say that the information given to us serves the present moment therefore easier to understand. In this fan-fiction and even in several fan-fiction, even if we know the powers and rules of the fan-fiction because we know the original story, the authors give us their information without any reason. For my opinion, I think you gave us his information to make us understand that he knows the world of Hunter x Hunter but there is another way to make us understand that he knows this world. The other way for me, is to describe the place of residence, he lives in Meteor City, show us that he lives there with the specificity that Meteor City has shown in the manga. Then it's the MC, the MC is quite interesting and ambitious but at the same time not interesting. Let me explain, telling us the general objective of the character is good but telling us all its little details that I must be friends with this one or kill this one is not interesting, show it to us. I don't like to hear the thoughts of the characters, I rather prefer to see their actions so that I can understand their thoughts for myself. Now let's talk about the Hunter x Hunter fan-fiction part. I have read several Hunter x Hunter fan fiction and have noticed that many authors have failed to capture the essence of Hunter x Hunter, the fighting. From my understanding the fights in Hunter x Hunter are separated into 2 parts: - The physical part where you use the power of your Hatsu to win. - The reflection part where we try to decipher the opponent's Hatsu to win. And it is this second part that many authors forget. To work on this second part I advise you to review his first fight against the Ancient. I don't take into account the second fight against the elder because the MC won only thanks to his improvement of his Hastu and not by understanding in depth the Hastu of the Elder. Here I hope it could help improve this story because I read it myself and I want to read a better way of it.

I don’t think it’s easier to write. On the contrary, I think it's more complicated. Because as we know The Goblins are a race which mainly works on ***, stealing and fighting. Now if I continue my idea, for me a real MC Gobelins must have the same faults as his race so the *** of the Gobelins is rape towards women because it is a Gobelins, the destruction of the village, the cruelty to the state pure, therefore a real monster who does not conform to the moral code. Because a real monster has no moral code. So those is not easy to write it down.

good novel so far. But I hope you wouldn't make the same people happy as the other novelists at MC Gobelins. Who dares to introduce human behavior and logic to Goblins who are barbaric, bloodthirsty, destructive and mad with lust but who in the end changes all of history because instead of having a Goblins we have a green-skinned super human? is all. I hope that even with his disciplined skill he will accept his Goblin nature and abandon his human morals which are of no use to a Goblin.