I Reincarnated as Raditz

As of chapter 13 on 5/16/22: Writing Quality (2/5), Stability of Updates (5/5), Story Development (3/5), Character Design (3/5) World Background Detail (3/5), Total Score (3.2). For the grammar, spelling was good, but there's a running sentence problem. Most of the time there is only one sentence/one period [.] in what should be a paragraph. There are many wrong word choices and cases of missing words so you have to fill in the blanks. There were multiple cases of the author saying they would go back and fix there chapters, but didn't. I highly suggest they do. Stability of updates are good, but quality should be prioritized. If they need to sacrifice time that could be used for updates, oh well. At the end, quality is what matters. Concerning story development, the story doesn't feel like a summary (3/4 of the time), so I'll give the author that, then again they also have the original story to go off of. The MC is so irritable it's annoying. This Alex guy intervenes so much it's annoying like his entire existence in the story and he even had to do something to Bulma so she can stop flirting with Raditz, because he... doesn't like it? Is she not attractive? is Raditz not a man? Is he not a teenager going through puberty? Has be been castrated or what? Isn't she supposed to be in his harem? The MC never expressed a desire for canon pairings (Vageta x bulma), so it's probably not that. As of chapter 13, Oolong said Raditz looks like a kid. According to saiyan biology, Raditz should look like a 7 year old until he is 18. If Raditz looked like a 7 year old, why would Bulma be attracted to him? So the question is, how old is Raditz supposed to be in this fanfic at that point time? There are inconsistencies, details that are left out, details that could be added and stuff that shouldn't have happened or been said due to the changes from cannon. Also, stuff that shouldn't happen so easily. For example, Goku going ikari after seeing the power ball just once after having his tail cut off. I'm sure Goku has seen the moon plenty of times in cannon after his tail was removed and has seen a power ball before. Ikari shouldn't be obtained so easily. As for character design and background, there isn't much of any details written concerning that, but it's an existing anime/manga, so it's not really needed which is why I gave an average of 3 stars. Overall, the story is a little entertaining to read, but a little annoying to read too.