/ Fantasy / Imaginary Friend
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Imagination is very beautiful which we can't relate to the real world. But that's what makes it more attractive. Only if our imaginations would come true, But only the beautiful one's though. Our world runs on reality, so we stop imagining after a particular age. But we never think what if this little thoughts also had life, what would they do after they are forgotten? This story will show you to think in a different way about the thoughts we have. Don't stop your imagination. Cause it helps you to build something new and different. And who knows, they might become real one day. By miracle!
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nice plot and a different kind of story. keep going❤❤ looking forward to your next chapters. i hope you improve a little in sentence developing.
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I read the two first chapter, I find the story so unique, I have never read this kind so far so it left me intrigued. I love the plot, Daniel coming to live with the girl .when we write a book, the character getting to know each other is the main point and I think you flawlessly showed in your book.
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nice story . keep it up. and increase the level of vocabulary . also read some novels. you will get more ideas. though overall it was nice.
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I found the story interesting and read all the chapters that have been posted so far. The story is different. It is unique. I felt that the author wanted to write as the main female character. This was at the beginning, but after the 17th chapter, I think there is a tendency to switch to the main male character. Understandable of course as the main female character has receded into a shell. If you are the narrator remain the narrator. If you are writing in first person and participating as a character do so till the end. No harm in that. World background is well described, that is the real world and the imaginary world. Character design is also good. The story is developing nicely. Stability of updates is progressing. Writing quality is good, but needs more improvement in sentence construction etc. I would suggest running your text through a grammar checker. We all make mistakes and I am no exception. I am waiting for updates :) All the best author.