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well done with this story would love to see them travel through other world having fun causing shenanigans image them joining fairy tail, or dxd making friends with Yasaka, or dbz. instead of kingdo building just adventure helping who they want or learning new power systems
It’s okay if you got nothing else. A decent pass time read. Is a bit draggy and plot is a bit vanilla for me. Not really exciting or comical. Overall 3/5 is fair rating.
this fic is disappointment. the MC power doesnt makes sense. MC suddenly know how to modify soul thingy its so absurd and nonsensical. did i already said that this fic story doesnt makes sense?
This story really stands out for me among the Naruto fanfics. I highly recommend it.
It's a good novel when you don't consider the main character as the main character. 430chapters in and the main character is still a side character.
It's simply incredible. And don't get me to the open ending, hinting possible things to come.
My honest opinion to this,Just Very Bad with a hella lot of plot holes, In one word
this type of ff is not for me wheremain characters cheat which is his only advantage is shared with female lead and its not even watered down version as said by author but full power. I understand that author didn't wanted her to lose importace but making her as stronger or arguably stronger than main character was a real turn off for the story it would have been alright if mc got after merging soul like konan got but no konan's power is exclusive but power of mc is not which is really annoying.
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main character relies on seals too much and while that's okay he didnt revolutionize sealing from an intent based art to something logic based like programming. and while the world progressed in their understanding of what chakra is. its still shallow and lacks depth and based too much on talent. and some of his wives were unnecessary and became redundant and the grand skim of things. The main character also barely scratched his potential but overall its a great story if a bit rushed. if there is a next book please have him suffer some set back to bring some urgency back into him to insure he acknowledges the importance of personal power
ampas anj, kenapa make lahir di kirigakure kalo ujung ujungnya ngebala konoha dasar anak tolol ga punya akal 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 ..............................................................
I agree with the commenter...author shoudn't be allowed near children, im pretty sure he is on the watchlist irl and this is his way to release his disgusting thoughts.
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I love a good story with characters that have OP abilities but are not so OP from the beginning, I like to read their difficulties and other problems they had to get to where they are at the end of the story. There isn't much of that in this story aside from the beginning, but it makes up for it with the plans, fun moments, and world development it has. . . . Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler . . . If I'm completely honest, I'm not a fan of harems, at first I didn't care because they were characters that were dead when the canon started or didn't have partners, so I didn't like adding Temari, but it's just a small detail. . Even so, I must say that Kaguya was a pleasant surprise and quite smoked, hahaha
Best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, beginning to end every part of the story was entertaining to read.
I got to above chapter 250 and in all honesty I can't really stomach reading anymore. This is more of a slice of life than I'm willing to stomach. Chapters upon chapters go by where nothing of substance really happens. Things that should take 1 chapter take 5 and I honestly can't stomach to keep reading it.
I didn't see mc doing anything against Konoha as of now and that really disappointed me as he has ruthlessly sold and betrayed the village that he was in.
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un tres bon livre avec une redecouverte du monde de naruto sur un autre point de vue qui est tout a fait realiste ,on y decouvre certains aspects qu on a pa jugé interressant et plusieurs aspects qu on decouvre et qui font du sens! a lire si vous êtes fan de Naruto
The story quality change over time, the author definitely improve over the fan-fic. It is one of the rare one where it actually explain Danzo contribution to the village, in a dark way of course. Author explain it in a way that he will still be a villain, but it make sense why the village still value him and the roots, and it not just a cancer of the village like most other naruto fan-fic. example, he provoke the hidden stone to attack the hidden sand after the sand declare war on the leave in the 3rd ninja war. The harem is great, each girl have a very well define personality, and not just a collectable for mc like most harem story. The story itself is a rare one where mc is not in konoha. A lot of the time, the original konoha plot is skip over, and the main plot focus on the hidden mist then to the hidden whirlpool where the mc make his own village, and he start gaining territory one by one until the end.
I've read this story 4 times and going through the 5th and it is just amazing. Best Naruto fanfic after Yuna's world. comment section is wildly full of grumpy people though, can't understand why...
Not the best naruto fanfic out there, and quite inconsistant with the original plot, with so many add-on info that don't exist in the original. Also some character get unnecessary hate just to force the plot to where it justify for the girl to hate that character. Though what good is the first romance between mc and Konan, it was so good, I don't feel that it any good to make it a harem instead. MC also kind of offend people a lot.
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to sum up all the characters in this fic would be idiots complete and utter idiots that makes mc feel smarter when I felt he was just average. So much thoughts about their reason for their decision was utterly wrong and stupid there was just no intrigue no way for mc to truly develop his skill in life or death situation he was OP because he just trains a lot and his godly talent. Tbh I'm really disappointed saw it has high rating but I don't really feel it deserves it.
Leia é muito bom. Eu gosto de como é realista, com personagens inteligentes, mas também pela história ser comigo e densa. Ótima leitura que eu fiquei fissurado.
I quite enjoyed this. There were a few bits where it dragged due to going into the weeds a little bit, but thats ok. The overall story and character development was very fun to read.
despite some comments about "sharing" his soul I still chose to read this. I have to say they really blew it out of proportion and even with the harem tag the novel was good enough for me to rate/review when I've maybe done so a handful of times. [img=recommend]
well done with this story would love to see them travel through other world having fun causing shenanigans image them joining fairy tail, or dxd making friends with Yasaka, or dbz. instead of kingdo building just adventure helping who they want or learning new power systems
It’s okay if you got nothing else. A decent pass time read. Is a bit draggy and plot is a bit vanilla for me. Not really exciting or comical. Overall 3/5 is fair rating.
this fic is disappointment. the MC power doesnt makes sense. MC suddenly know how to modify soul thingy its so absurd and nonsensical. did i already said that this fic story doesnt makes sense?
This story really stands out for me among the Naruto fanfics. I highly recommend it.
It's a good novel when you don't consider the main character as the main character. 430chapters in and the main character is still a side character.
It's simply incredible. And don't get me to the open ending, hinting possible things to come.
My honest opinion to this,Just Very Bad with a hella lot of plot holes, In one word
this type of ff is not for me wheremain characters cheat which is his only advantage is shared with female lead and its not even watered down version as said by author but full power. I understand that author didn't wanted her to lose importace but making her as stronger or arguably stronger than main character was a real turn off for the story it would have been alright if mc got after merging soul like konan got but no konan's power is exclusive but power of mc is not which is really annoying.
Reveal Spoiler main character relies on seals too much and while that's okay he didnt revolutionize sealing from an intent based art to something logic based like programming. and while the world progressed in their understanding of what chakra is. its still shallow and lacks depth and based too much on talent. and some of his wives were unnecessary and became redundant and the grand skim of things. The main character also barely scratched his potential but overall its a great story if a bit rushed. if there is a next book please have him suffer some set back to bring some urgency back into him to insure he acknowledges the importance of personal power
ampas anj, kenapa make lahir di kirigakure kalo ujung ujungnya ngebala konoha dasar anak tolol ga punya akal 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 ..............................................................
I agree with the commenter...author shoudn't be allowed near children, im pretty sure he is on the watchlist irl and this is his way to release his disgusting thoughts.
Reveal Spoiler I love a good story with characters that have OP abilities but are not so OP from the beginning, I like to read their difficulties and other problems they had to get to where they are at the end of the story. There isn't much of that in this story aside from the beginning, but it makes up for it with the plans, fun moments, and world development it has. . . . Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler -Spoiler - Spoiler . . . If I'm completely honest, I'm not a fan of harems, at first I didn't care because they were characters that were dead when the canon started or didn't have partners, so I didn't like adding Temari, but it's just a small detail. . Even so, I must say that Kaguya was a pleasant surprise and quite smoked, hahaha
Best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, beginning to end every part of the story was entertaining to read.
I got to above chapter 250 and in all honesty I can't really stomach reading anymore. This is more of a slice of life than I'm willing to stomach. Chapters upon chapters go by where nothing of substance really happens. Things that should take 1 chapter take 5 and I honestly can't stomach to keep reading it.
I didn't see mc doing anything against Konoha as of now and that really disappointed me as he has ruthlessly sold and betrayed the village that he was in.
Reveal Spoiler un tres bon livre avec une redecouverte du monde de naruto sur un autre point de vue qui est tout a fait realiste ,on y decouvre certains aspects qu on a pa jugé interressant et plusieurs aspects qu on decouvre et qui font du sens! a lire si vous êtes fan de Naruto
The story quality change over time, the author definitely improve over the fan-fic. It is one of the rare one where it actually explain Danzo contribution to the village, in a dark way of course. Author explain it in a way that he will still be a villain, but it make sense why the village still value him and the roots, and it not just a cancer of the village like most other naruto fan-fic. example, he provoke the hidden stone to attack the hidden sand after the sand declare war on the leave in the 3rd ninja war. The harem is great, each girl have a very well define personality, and not just a collectable for mc like most harem story. The story itself is a rare one where mc is not in konoha. A lot of the time, the original konoha plot is skip over, and the main plot focus on the hidden mist then to the hidden whirlpool where the mc make his own village, and he start gaining territory one by one until the end.
I've read this story 4 times and going through the 5th and it is just amazing. Best Naruto fanfic after Yuna's world. comment section is wildly full of grumpy people though, can't understand why...
Not the best naruto fanfic out there, and quite inconsistant with the original plot, with so many add-on info that don't exist in the original. Also some character get unnecessary hate just to force the plot to where it justify for the girl to hate that character. Though what good is the first romance between mc and Konan, it was so good, I don't feel that it any good to make it a harem instead. MC also kind of offend people a lot.
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to sum up all the characters in this fic would be idiots complete and utter idiots that makes mc feel smarter when I felt he was just average. So much thoughts about their reason for their decision was utterly wrong and stupid there was just no intrigue no way for mc to truly develop his skill in life or death situation he was OP because he just trains a lot and his godly talent. Tbh I'm really disappointed saw it has high rating but I don't really feel it deserves it.
Leia é muito bom. Eu gosto de como é realista, com personagens inteligentes, mas também pela história ser comigo e densa. Ótima leitura que eu fiquei fissurado.
I quite enjoyed this. There were a few bits where it dragged due to going into the weeds a little bit, but thats ok. The overall story and character development was very fun to read.
despite some comments about "sharing" his soul I still chose to read this. I have to say they really blew it out of proportion and even with the harem tag the novel was good enough for me to rate/review when I've maybe done so a handful of times. [img=recommend]