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One of my friends recomend it and i am thankfull of that . Really amazing story . If u are a person who like long narration of scene ..... strong relationship between friends .... untold story of past .... struggle ..... then this story is written for u ...... Ml's charector is good . Has awsm friends , gardian, buuuuuut FL is still missing๐๐๐๐ hope she arrive soon๐ค๐ค๐ค
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I like this story . Very musterious . ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ but at the same time explain feeling of love between friends beatifully . Description is tooo long since i am a impatient type of person so usully skip those (sorry๐๐๐)...I was waiting for fl before write a review so here i am .....i like both ofMC (specially the surname of ML ..... OBEROI๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ) ALL THE BEST dear author ...
Hello viewers. I really appreciates this novel . Storyline is awesome and the continuous thrill of mystery is way too cool. I prefer this book to those who have a bit of patience coz the stroy needs some chapters for character development and plot making. By the way even if you are not having patience I'm telling you give it a try, coz I know you can't resist this book after trying it. A little bit of grammatical mistakes can be seen but as we all know nobody is perfect so please be kind and avoid such petty things. I am literally a big fan of this novel. ๐๐๐๐๐
Refreshing storyline Gr8 concepts.... Amazing writing skill.... All in all a must read story.... Dear author please update faster....We are waiting for you,๐๐๐๐
Okay, first your synopsis sells the story and makes me engrossed in it, second, the plot is amazing. Great job author, keep up the good work.
Good introduction. The character of the ML is fairly good, the story is developing nicely and I believe you are biding your time in introducing FL. The world building is good too. Keep it up.
This seems to be an interesting story as the MC is an ML. I rated 4 stars as there were some grammar errors.I suggest have it proofread by someone then.I initially corrected some of it myself to help you out. But over all, this is a great story so Keep it up!
I rarely read novels wherein the MC is the ML. The synopsis has me interested especially about the MLโs background. As far as Iโve read, Iโm excited to see how the FL would enter the book. Writing Quality: The authorโs native language is probably not english, which is understandable. Based on the chapters, the grammar has been improving. In my opinion, I suggest using an editor or something similar. It doesnโt affect the overall presentation of the story, but I think it could make a great change to your story. Stability of Updates: Iโm not sure how frequent the author updates Story Development: As Iโm making this review, this book had 20 chapters. Itโs rather early to say anything but both the characters and plot have potential.
The image of a super cool boss ... raises some questions. On one side are the presidents, the mafia, the bandits and the rest ... is there someone behind such a boss? Otherwise, it would have been eliminated a long time ago. In this world, the main thing is not money but information. After a person reaches a threshold of 4-10 billion dollars, he is being monitored by intelligence agencies ... if he is not a marianette of some influential group, he would have been eliminated long ago. The trust? In this environment? It is more likely to say that his employees are 90 percent spies in third countries, possibly double or even triple agents. Yes, and usually such individuals of this magnitude do not shine on the whole world, about 10-20 people around the world know about them and hello ... they are always in the shadows and rule the whole world. It looks like a conspiracy theory, a golden billion, a fantasy in general. And the century of such already lit up rich people is not long. It's like the movie House of Cards or The Elusive Bourne. Such thoughts appeared to me after reading the first 2 chapters. Ohhhh ... it could not have done without the black arms market, and where did the IAEA look? If this is such a cool boss, he would be able to find specialists who would open the safe ... or he was not such a cool boss ... a little contradictory ... the information age ... there have long been cameras capable of seeing through metal, walls .. .and, if possible, open a safe ... how to have dinner in the evening. But perhaps, as a reader, Iโm too corrosive ... as already mentioned by one of the reviewers ... off-top. Oh, if he were looking for this key ... then this information would have leaked to third countries and would have been a very smart argument in communicating with him ... by the way Iโll notice .... Yes, and nowadays powerful medicines, medical technologies, not those that were in the 20th century ... can easily restore memory ... if he is such a super cool boss ... these are also thoughts out loud. And so it is written fascinatingly, it is easy to read, there is intrigue, minor roughnesses in the description of the boss, and so a very curious short story. I recommend reading it!
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Great story. Since i added it to my collection i haven't stop reading it. The writer is quite great with words and description... Good up the good work.
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Hi everyone... The author here... Shamelessly giving myself 5 stars...... I would like to thank you all for your kind support... This is my first novel that I am writing... In Your Arms Forever is a mysterious romance novel with gr8 storyline and many new concepts.... It's based on Indian community as the leads were brought up in India.... Later the story will go on a World Tour as the mysteries unfold themselves.... The story is based on the fact that both the leads are unaware of their origins and are fighting to find and protect it. So I request you all to take a few minutes of your precious time and join me in this new and exciting story that will at some point remind you of your childhood ๐๐๐
So far so good, the story is very interesting. I need to commend the writing skills of the writer...... But some words are wrongly spelt, that can be due to typographical errors and I'm not blaming you for it just calling ur attention to it. Besides that...... I really really enjoyed the novel,eager for more chapters to be released.
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Great story line..... Good emotional environment... Strong Relationship..... Mysterious Past ..... Hidden identities... Reliving the school dayd This is one in all story ....A must read work . Like the starting of the book along with the humor moments....And childish innocence that most people miss during their *****hood.... This book really stirred up all memories of the school life and being a care free child again .... Waiting for the female lead to enter ... Hope the author doesn't disappointed us ...
Read! Read! Read! This story has an amazing and interesting plot. An independent male lead and a loyal friends. Though I am still waiting for the female lead, this story has a good start. And what is amazing about this, is that this is based on an Indian community, if Iโm right .๐
The story is so mysterious.. I really like it. The best thing from the story is the description of the friendship. It's so refreshing. Fl is rocking.
Mystery! That's what this story is. Unlike other stories I have read, the ML is independent, has a mysterious past, and lot of local elders and friends. I like the storyline sofar. Wondering how FL is going to link in all of this! My only suggestion to author - use an editor or translator. Having read so many novels here, grammatical errors are not a problem, but a word drastically misspelled is a problem, esp when it happens often. This not going to stop me from reading this novel. Also to keep our interest, better to update a few chapters a day instead of just one!