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This is story about a youth that got called because God need help. Yes, 20 years old virgin, orphan, no achievement in life still got favor from God to help him for something.
3 wishes? sure, maybe I can get more along the way by blackmailing Him.
This is my first fan-fiction, also English is not my native language so don't expect good grammar.
Disclaimer : I don't own any of the character from anime and manga, also some story from the original.
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Overall, this is good fanfic. Yeah someone maybe say the MC is too op in begining. But let me say something. He almost not using his power until this point. He just train and train. He fucking train demon. He just don't want have high LV without good basic. He learn basic sword style, He train his body, and train his magic (lol the real 'basic' magic fireball and it really just a ball of fire) so He not just op from start. Next for Chara develop in this fanfic, yeah it bit too fast for falling but they have good alibi for it so acceptable for me. For upload stability, this fanfic almost daily upload so it 5 star. For story' it just begining and story develop around his training sesaon and his daily life. For world building, this fanfic so it not really important i think almost every reader already know about this world.
Great novel for men of culture lol. It is great to see that the author listened to the suggestion of the guys who pointed out the bad writing format his first chapter have. I appreciate that!
Consider these worlds: - "ยทstrike the bloodยท" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ยทShinmai Maล no Keiyakushaยท = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "ยทTO LOVE RUยท" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"ยทDate a liveยท" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -ยทTrinity Sevenยท = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -ยทInfinite Stratosยท= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -ยทSword Art Onlineยท= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -ยทCampione!ยท= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -ยทDungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou kaยท = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"ยทSekireyยท"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -ยทSeirei tsukai no blade danceยท = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
At first chapter or prologue, it's really bad because the dialogue format, you choose something like that and I'm quite happy when you did change it to more suits and better format. The reason why it's bad because seems someone can't understand what the heck is going on with the story itself and the dialogue (again), made me hard to undertstand. I know it's silly to review it when still in chapter 4 but I just want author can get better rather than *****ing around. I hope this can surpass Danmachi Einlion ver.
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The only plot other than women falling in love with the mc is the author making gods look stupid so that the protagonist looks smart. That or the protagonist making gods think he's smart by telling them knowledge he has from the danmachi anime. The protagonist went from level one to level 7 in a single time skip. Don't expect any development to happen that doesn't involve people wanting to steal his women. Even then, it's just typical xianxia face slap
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this is surprisingly bad I wont explain y its bad because I don't wanna hurt the authors feelings. And also because its quite obvious why its bad.
This fanfic is so good, I cannot wait upcoming chapter.. Please release it soon!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐