Synopsis
Cultivation is a Legend, a myth that ordinary people only heard in stories.
Contrary to what people believed, cultivators do exist, hiding in plain sight.
To make up for the lack of essence Qi on Earth, a group of cultivators "The Consortium" developed LEGEND, a VIRTUAL REALITY SYSTEM to help them enhance their skills.
To cultivators and martial artist, LEGEND is world where they could practice and develop their skills.
To ordinary people, it is a world of entertainment, adventure.
To wealth seekers, it is a world of business, opportunities and treasures.
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Feng Ji Xuan, a top expert in the game after playing for 15 years was betrayed and killed by his Fiancée because of the Family inheritance left by his grandfather.
In a moment which he thought all was lost, Feng Ji Xuan finds himself 20 years back into the past with the Ancestral ring at his finger. A ring which he thought was the reason of his second chance.
Follow our MC as he regains himself, not for revenge but to become strong as he strive to find answers about cultivator's legend.
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This is my first work. English is not my first language so please bear with me and be kind on your comments, Okay?
Please support my work if you find it interesting. My aim writing this novel is to improve my English. However, the story left me entranced so I keep on writing it. I appreciate any constructive criticism from you my Dear Readers.
Some places and names in this novel features China’s famous places and people. I will appreciate your advice if you find any mistakes. I’m not familiar with China’s traditions and customs, so I apologize in advance if I wrote offending words. Thank you.
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Hello Fellow Daoist! Newbie author here. Thank you for reading and rating my work. I'll try to add new chap's daily. Appreciate all you comments and suggestions. Thanks!
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One of the best stories in original novels and the legit novels I think story is unquie has a very good world building and character development too I will give most credit to storytelling it is clear it is not rush or confused when explaining the story I think novel is the great and I like it (I start reading light novels in 2012 and i think it is one of the best in not rushing and explaining with clarity and I like it keep it up author of this novel)
Okay, so, this is my first time writing a review. The novel is interesting, but it just feels like a copy of Reincarnation of the strongest sword god or shura's wrath with a different name and "characters". The novel doesn't have a identity. I dont like how, like a lot of chinese novels, the numbers here are exaggerated as hell, "guild x has hundreds of millions of players" "the helmet costs five hundred thousand dollars, it selled 1.2 billion on the first day it started selling" a "good' point for me, is that the MC doesnt live for revenge or anything, though he being killed by his fiancee, being reborn and he just goes like "oh, okay" is kinda bad. At least at the start, the MC does what all other Second Chance novel MC's do, buys the capsule, goes to a "high" level area, kills monsters with a level higher than him, find chests, bla bla bla. Author needs a editor too, people can understand what is written, but seeing mc thinking about himself like he's talking about another person is strange.
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Really nice story. Surprised it's not in the top 10. Probably only because of low chapter number but keep it up. Can go far if same quality for chapter la coming
full of coincidence for the convenience of the MC MC want cultivation technique.. 3 daoist fight near his camp MC want the game.. he wins a raffle and the prize is one of the most expensive helmet and best in performance (S grade helmet) MC want to had friends to make guild the day after resurrecting he meets rankers MC want to meet his bff.. go to a resto then see his bff and many more.. too much coincidence that it make me sick and there are things that are unbelievable in this story or there are no sense like 1.1m helmet giveaways for a game that is new then a new game that was sold for 200m a day.. just for a day like every person in the world had the money (half a million for one) to buy a game on its first day.. it should be in guiness lol..
The story is a mix of standard cultivation and a reincarnation into past VR. The story's pace is good, the English quality is OK, a lot better than other stories I've read it's only some sentences missing keywords to make the sentence make sense. The story has a grand background that is well designed my only gripe is that it is all set up seemingly to make the Main Character OP. Lastly, the character development could be worked upon as many characters seem like carbon copies of each other and lack depth. Overall a decent read, better than some of the licensed stories I've read on Qidian.
Skip this one, typical story of rebirth and cultivation and online gaming, problem is author characters are 2 dimensional he does not describe them well and most parts he does not even try to describe, he played for 2 years and got lvl 75 using his cultivation skills, after 8 years he was one of the top 5 players... Totally dissppointed author did not even descrbe first life.
Hello Fellow Daoist and readers, Author here. At the End of Chapter 31-Primordialis-Creatio Ars, I should have explained How our MC got reincarnated into the past since the ring spirit have woken up. You might have already guess. However, since I honestly forgot, lets just see in future chapters how he was reincarnated, and why 20 years back. Probably there's a reason for it. Lets see how the story goes then. And please write some reviews for me to read and give some inspiration. Enjoy! :):):)
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For most part, even though I like the thought that the main charcter came back in time, or, time travelled. The virtual reality game, that, includes cultivation and real cultivation erks me very much. I see that there is no point at all whatsoever by adding the cultivation aspect in real life. For a better comparison, it is like having two thiesis in an essay. I am not saying the story idea (is having VRMMORPG and cultivation) is bad, but the two topic does not match properly in my perpective. I think that it is better if the story 'only' follow one aspect, either VRMMORPG or cultivation because scientific 'stuffs' does not match well with cultivation 'stuffs.' And that is all to my review. Hope, you (the reader of my review), can see my point.
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I love and hate this novel at the same time. I keep coming back to it though so clearly I find it worth reading. There is a great need for an editor as the English is all over the place. There are times where you can see the author is trying new things without really knowing what he is doing, like the overwhelming amount of detail given for random bosses which will die in the same chapter. If they are going to just die, we don't need four paragraphs of detail on how they look down to their fingernails. This happens with places that will never be come across again and so on. However, the good parts are enough to overcome the bad. The characters are interesting and the dialogue while sometimes jilted is still fun. The story has some cliches and plot holes but it is overall well put together and keeps you interested in what will happen next. There are some nice ideas that seem fresh to me like the ability to cultivate in a game working in real life as well. If this sounds like faint praise, I don't mean it that way. For a new author who is clearly still struggling with various aspects of the novel, it is an excellent work. If it gets an edit and maybe a few corrections to some of the more obvious plot holes, this novel would easily be in my top 3 original works on qidian.
probably the best story here. only rssg, two and tle are as good and they originate from gt and only are translated so they wont count. keep up the good work. this really is a gem among useless naruto and one piece fan fictions. i want to see this published as a book. congrats to the author for being awesome! thanks for this story and give me more!
A new and interesting take on a reborn MC, where not only does he have a calm, resonable, and happy personality. But our MC has no revenge plot on his previous life’s killer. Also the combination between cultivation and virtual reality games is well done. Although it starts off with a typical reborn virtual reality with op items and skill, but takes a turn of cultivation mixed into the story. One of the most amazing plotlines for me was the Feng family inheritence build up, very interesting.
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It is a big surprise when I found out the secrets of fang family and black phoniex and the story have very good build up in suspense and the flashback when I am reading the words I can imagine the video in my head. Very cool bro the author
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I quite like this novel, as it was pretty good since the start. The quality of writing was quite bad after the first couple chapters, seeing a dip in consistency. But I persevered due to having faith in the novel. Later on I began to notice a slight increase in the quality of grammar. With my hopes up I kept on reading with a light heart. Sadly, with the introduction of one character and subsequent appearances of said character, I have dropped this novel. My review is a warning to those who hate the personality of that character from rebirth of a guardian, or whatever its called. A brief insight to that character is that she calls the mc stupid, and retorts with things like, “brat?! Your whole family are brats!” Or something to that effect. The character I am speaking of is the same but far worse as that is all she does. I have yet to see her contribute in anyway to the story’s plot or development, disregarding the fact that she is a key character in the endgame, but one that should be changed as she acts like a spoiled 5 year old.
Where have you been my whole life. Oh my God this novel all there genres i love the most even though its clichéd as hell. I love reincarnation, virtual reality and cultivation novels but never read one with all 3-in-1 damn this is going to be awesome. After reading through all the chapter i will make another review. Thanks in advance author.
The story is entertaining. I like it. Mixing cultivation with game elements, it's pretty good. Solid story. But please...please...please, hire or get someone to proofread the chapters. The grammar and spelling mistakes, although it can be fixed with common sense, keeps distracting me from the story and the flow of the story.
What is up with this story selling your cultivation manual then make a guild after being betrayed. How is the MC so stupid. Why are reincarnated people so nice. After getting all the cheats they try to make several people stronger why? .......ggdh.ghjxkshdbvdbd.dhdj.hducundbvdgshwhehevvrctchcdhdufucuf...m.........f..gg..g.g.g.g.g.g.g.g.d.f.f.f.f.f..ff.f.f.f..f.f.f.f.f.f.f.f.f.f.f..g.h.h.b.j..f..d.s.s..s.w.c.c.c..c.k.ij..j.j.j....fguydffgy.ggfdfyg gt
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