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One day a young man who likes to read manga and watch anime, was sent into another world, he wokes up in the world of Hero Academia as The son of Enji Todoroki and the twin of Shoto Todoroki.
"Escanor!" they call him
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I just wanted to write this for fun, a not so op but also op story, no need for roasting or telling me im dumb cuz I don't care, I write this for fun, I just want to share it, but if you like it leave some reviews cuz I'm shameless
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So much ****ed, first the name, who names their son escanor todoroki, that too when escanor is an European name and Japanese hate everything not Japanese. Then starts the cringe, the fkr didn't do anything for 14 yrs, cannon should be fkd but it's not and he behaves like a beta MC, he should be the sin of pride, but there is not even p from pride, so just a waste of time, there are better ffs out there.
Was enjoying it until the MC started to work on his personality like a beta.... he’s supposed to be the Lion Sin of Pride so he should be prideful but now he wants to “change” lol cringe
I personally couldnt get past chapter 3, and I didnt even finish it. Which I know to many will automatically invalidate my review, but hear me out if you have the spare time. [ Skip to Bottom to See all Stars ] The Writing Quality is at most a 3, I never really knew what was going on, it all seemed like gibberish to me, I knew who the main character was suppost to be, and I knew what he was doing, but if I try and even remember what actually went on, it comes out blank. The story is entirely un-interesting and honestly numbs the brain. Stability of Updates is 5, sense while I really dont like this story, the author is keeping his updates stable and its a satisfactory ammount for the fan-base it has. Story Development I can't really review sense by the time of chapter 3, I couldn't even understand if there was a story or if it was just a self-insert where the author wanted to be Escanor but also Todoroki's twin at the same time because he practically abandons him family, worse than Todoroki's father in the regard he even feels like his family owes him. ( Which is not 'The Sin of Pride' its the sin of a idiot who wants everything hand given to him like the apple given upon to eve ), but from the direction I guess this story will go in past chapter 3, I'm going to give it a 3 star, simply because I as the reviewer don't enjoy it and don't see much prospects, the author may improve in a short time span and suddenly write the next scripture. Character Design, if I could I would give it 0, but I must give it 1 star simply because the system requires it, and also he atleast made a character of some sort. The MC is honestly just atrocious in behavior, personality, he's not even atrocious as in he's 'Evil' he's just a bad human being who's actions dont represent his thoughts, and his thoughts hopefully never get turned into action sense he's a self-entitled prick. World Background, straight 1 because its just MHA, the MC litteraly lets his entirely family suffer the same fate as in MHA, nothing special about the world, it's your classic self-insert that will most likely be dropped and is majority enjoyed by Power-Fantasy crazed people. Writing Quality: 3 Stars Stability of Updates: 5 Stars Story Development: 2 Stars Character Design: 1 Star World Background: 1 Star ^ [0 If not required by the site, its utterly atrocious]
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Writing is really bad. Escanor was decent until he decided he would try to become less prideful... which defeats the purpose of putting Escanor into the story.
It's just not good. H H Hh H Hg H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H Hh H H Hh H H H H H H H H H Hh H Hh Hh H H H H H H Hh H H H
Man i think u should fix the mc, his pride is less than i expected and its starting to get worse hope u fix that Btw thanks for writing this fic
Hello there LovableBerry. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release more chapters per day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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This romance is pure nonsense. The fights are extremely repetitive, since apparently the author only makes the iconic "tita attack" ---------- as z z z z da z z z z z z z z z z z
Love it. Don't hesitate read it. Every part of the story is great. I love Mc's personality and decisions. I like his independent spirit and Op like power.
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Look this is interesting but it has senseless **** that made me drop. -MC is shoto bro, SO cannon is fked BUT 14 yrs this asshole lived and did nothing, and author didnt even show any world development nothing. Not even family moments during those yrs. -No one is curious that MC has an axe quirk...Endevor would've definitely been curious *And know what stupid? author makes MC get kicked out for no reason, senseless **** -MC's quirk at 4 yrs old allows him to barely fight his dad, at noon [or atleast allows him to do so as he gets older]..MC is strong, but he dosnt do **** to prevent mothers abuse, or brothers abuse,,,he is powerful [and also should be very smart cause he is SI, but no, dosnt do **** cause I assume author wants cannon---un imaginative, look, I get its hard to think of ****, BUT if The MC is strong enough to defeat shoto with a punch why didnt he help em,,fking retarded,,,,he could;ve taken dads focus and protected Family] -As mentioned above, author dosnt imagine **** and senseless **** happens,,like MC not helping, when he clearly can....he is an ***** in a kids mind, why not just skip grades?, he was strong, why not show that to dad and prevent tragic cannon events from happening? -MC born to a japanese household has a stupid name like escanor, again, unimaginative and stupid . -Author does changes but follows cannon, and seeing how stupid **** happens, I bet MC will suck izukus dick, be friends/rivals with bakugo..ignore Hippocrates of UA, and BNHA world. Look this is interesting but a lot of senseless **** happens, rewrite and fix is what I suggest.