Nice short story,
But maybe you must improve with naming the characters.
I laugh with the name Yao and Xiao 😂, maybe only aunty zhang has a proper naming in this story.
Don't let the naming made you stop reading this story, it has a nice vibe.
Keep it up!
😊
Nice short story, But maybe you must improve with naming the characters. I laugh with the name Yao and Xiao 😂, maybe only aunty zhang has a proper naming in this story. Don't let the naming made you stop reading this story, it has a nice vibe. Keep it up! 😊