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Synopsis
Some powers should never be unearthed.
Grief-stricken by the loss of his loved one, Azorious Lein ventured into the world looking to bring her back.
However, the secret of Life and Death wil quickly prove to be more than he bargained for.
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The blood running in veins of sacrifice has no hope to live in the world where it must die. The world turns against the flesh to worship the crimes.
Another hit from space penguin. As a long time fan i got to say noone can quite capture the dread and potential of the human experience quite so as him.
I really enjoyed reading this magic system book. It was heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. A rollercoaster of emotions. The plot is very interesting and I love that the book is discriptive. I could almost feel like I was there!
The story is so incredibly well-written. The character goes on this journey of self-reflection and adventure to save his partner and there is something bittersweet about that. The author takes you on a mind-bending journey. The world and magic system are very refreshing and well thought out. 5/5. Please give this book a read, you will not regret it!
Overall it's not a bad start but it's too early to give a full review on everything. I like the premise of the story so far though and do see it doing very well if the author keeps up with the updates [img=recommend] I'd recommend it but just be patient till more chapters drop
Writing Quality- 9/10 Update Stability- 10/10 Story Development- too early, 8/10 Chara design- same as above, 8/10 World BG- same as above, 8/10
Chapters read: 6/8 The idea of a lover doing everything to get his lover back is a great one. I must admit, I'm ready to do the same. The flow of the story in the beginning if good, but after the third chapter I suddenly found myself lost, and I couldn't figure out what's going on. However, we know a little about the two lovers still, I liked them a lot, their dance, described in the fifth chapter, and their behavior with each other described in the beginning. This story has a great potential, I recommend everyone who's fan of this genre to read it and enjoy! My best wishes to the author!
Loved the first chapter it was well written and I loved all the other chapters too, great work author. The story is so intriguing, I can't wait to read more chapters. I highly recommend this book to any reader and I believe they will also love this book as much as I did.
If you're a sucker for magic and some good writing go fo it. The story is about a man who is too powerful for his own good. We see his character development as he's ready to give up his to protect someone he love. The author is doing an excellent job. peace;
Very interesting start. Mana Heart doesn't take, what I would consider, the traditional route of most fantasy Webnovels. Instead, the MC has already achieved power but chooses to give it up for what he cares about. I love that there is an apparent shift in the MC behavior around chapter 3. Despite his new living conditions, he clearly lives without regret after making his sacrifice. Very well written, I am interested to see where this goes!