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Horrible grammar but it has a new idea i haven't seen a system that uses creepy pasta 照らすは闇 僕らは歩き慣れてきた日々も淘汰 夢は安泰な暮らしだが 刺激不足故にタラタラ 照らすは熄み 僕らの歩き慣れていた道はどこだ 時はたまに癪だが 温もりに包まれ只 炎が立つ導の方へ 思い出すは優しいメロディー 永遠は無いんだと 無いんだと云フ それもまたイイねと笑ってみる 輝けばいつかは光も絶える 僕らは命の火が消えるその日まで歩いてゆく ところで何故僕らは 思考を急に辞めているんだ 夢は安泰な暮らしだが 知識不足故にハラハラ 食せば Yummy ヨスガに 縋り付いたまま朽ちて行くんだ ここは業火の中だが 傷跡がヒリつき只 水面が立つ光の方へ 手を取るは新しいメモリー 夜空が分かつ導の方へ 遮るは堅苦しいセオリー 永遠は無いんだと 無いんだと云フ やっぱ苦しいねと泣いてみる 風船もいつかは萎むか割れる 僕らは命の泉を護り続けて繋いでゆく 学びきれずに卒業 伝えきれずに失恋 遊びきれずに決別 面倒臭いが 地獄じゃあるまいし 音が出る玩具も 痛みを飛ばす魔法も全部 僕にとっての宝物 永遠は無いんだと 無いんだと云フ 僕らは命の火が消えるその日まで歩いてゆく
I encourage you to continue..this type of novel...I enjoy the little story you put on the story..😁......please update regularly.. Oh how I hate this words requirement..
A W novel my JIDEM. Very refreshing to read dontdroporyoumightdropthesoapintheshower 👀 Now have some healthy frogs 🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸
New type of novel I like it. 😎😎😎😎😎🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Love all of it please continue! Honestly this is pretty good I've seen similar things like a minecraft in marvel type novel samw as this one but yours has better grammar & translation compared to that one cause i don't think it was written by Simone who knows much English.
Cool........................................................................................................................................
A very good new idea even though the grammar is bad it would deserve a 5 star if it was fixed it also reminds me of game creator in marvel same feeling sorta
Interessante, eu estou me divertindo bastante, infelizmente são poucos capítulos. Continue o bom trabalho. ...................................................................................................................
Since no one else is giving you a power stone I decided to because I really like this story and really encrourage to continue this story because h have not seen one like and I enjoy me some creepypasta content.