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Synopsis
a fan of DBZ struck with lightning wakes in a body of Noah Jones. with abilities and memories of the Goku, Piccolo, freiza, and buu from dragon ball z in Marvel world.
Noah: " oozaru Saiyan powers, instantansmission, Saiyan god, ultra instinct, and a zenkai, a lot of potential..."
" magic, telepathy, from piccolo..."
"absorption, candy magic, regeneration from Buu"
"telekinesis, mind lock, golden frieza..."
"wait purple head iam comming"
"he eh ehe ehehe ha haha ah muhamuhahahahahah"
"Oh but my power level is to low"
BYE BYE gotta train a lot
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Write a reviewInteresting story idea, fast development. Enjoyable moments and interesting delivery on prologue (no spoilers here).Only comment is to flush out your main character more or at least his core. He can be a little bland like any personality is only there for the story in the moment. Even this shouldn't discourage you as this is a great start. Keep it up.
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The author isnt very good with punctionality but the story is reasonable. I enjoy his ideas and character design, I only hope he continues this novel and makes it go further than just movies.
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In the office tomorrow and the rest of town this morning but it from you at the latest and greatest thing ever but we are going back and will get back on the road to recovery and greatest but it to me rujen and I will get it to you by tomorrow and pick them and I will have a better system is good for me too but I am going to be there for a hold on my place in the world is a while but I will get it to you tomorrow morning and then the other day and I was like I was in a meeting and will be back and I can make it to the meeting on the Gamer and the other is a while to see the house
In the office tomorrow and the rest of town this morning but it from you at the latest and greatest thing ever but we are going back and will get back on the road to recovery and greatest but it to me rujen and I will get it to you by tomorrow and pick them and I will have a better system is good for me too but I am going to be there for a hold on my place in the world is a while but I will get it to you tomorrow morning and then the other day and I was like I was in a meeting and will be back and I can make it to the meeting on the Gamer and the other is a while to see the house
In the office tomorrow and the rest of town this morning but it from you at the latest and greatest thing ever but we are going back and will get back on the road to recovery and greatest but it to me rujen and I will get it to you by tomorrow and pick them and I will have a better system is good for me too but I am going to be there for a hold on my place in the world is a while but I will get it to you tomorrow morning and then the other day and I was like I was in a meeting and will be back and I can make it to the meeting on the Gamer and the other is a while to see the house
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Author argentum123
Ugh the story is terrible. The premise to this story was great but exution to story telling aspect is just terrible. It feels like when reading this story it is just moving from one major event to the next between chapter's . I mean seriously man in fist chapter the mc reincarnated with the memories and power's of some of the most powerful character in all of dbz and just starting out trying grasp some of those abilities and techniques. Then in the very next chapter 4 years have magically pass and just bunch of world building and information just glossed over for example he just out of no where has a super hero name and while reading through this when super hero name got introduced i thought to myself who the f u c k is that. I counted to read this eventually figured it out.