MHA: Dark Angel

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Spc_Monk

alright, quick information for you guys that will read this : 1. mc reincarnate but lost his personal memories 2. multiverse (world hopping)

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FunWriter

Cool story. keep up the updating stability then we're cool. By the way thanks for not making it an another harem story. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

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Y0G_S0TH0TH

it's not bad per se. but a lot of cringes and unnecessary plot. the characters are not of their original self. yes, it's fanfic so it'll be different but I was hoping for the characters to stay true to themselves. The resource realm ruined it and so did the extra wishes. this story ain't for me but some might enjoy it. good luck with your novel👍

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TheRedPlanetMars

The way that the resource realm is used is cool. But just make the resources that make him omnipotent blocked till he's dead in this story. So you could have a good story with a man with limited powers.

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HatefulRaijin

It's pretty nice the pace is fine imo the only problem I have is that the confession with fuyumi was too fast but ig the progress was just under the time skip. About the resource realm, tho does it have everything resource imaginable? I'm guessing it does cause he gets his DNA from there cause if so there's so much op stuff in there that will help him get to his level easily like the stuff from cultivation novels and stat-increasing stuff from games, Also considering this is a mha fanfic that world has a pretty low power sealing sure there are some conflicts but it could get resolved easily with like city buster strength and he has the resource realm to help himself power up so will he idk go to other worlds after resolving most of the conflicts in mha or will you just end it?

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Paradox2000

Writing Quality: So far the writing quality is good, I mostly keeps my expectations low for writing quality in fanfics but this one is still better than most fanfics out there. Updates: So far the updates are stable and good, I hope the author makes this consistency Story Development: The story develops very well, from character interactions to the power system, I can't really find some big flaws in this fanfic considering it as a fanfic. Protagonist: Well personally I like this protagonist a lot, most fanfics either makes a ruthless edgelord of a protagonist or a harem seeking horney mfs. The MC of this novel seems more human, he doesn't have some top tier character development but his character from the beginning is well shaped. He loves his family, have enemies, loves and hates while making decisions that makes his less childish but also something someone of his age would do. Side Characters: Since it's a fanfic there isn't much to say about the side characters but most fanfics I've read mostly butcher the personalities of the side characters but this fanfic blends the OC MC into the world perfectly. One thing that I would like to highlight a scene when Momo came to pick up MC for school in her car and MC's sister asked Momo if she likes him for which Momo replied with a straight "No", I like this instance personally because unlike in other fanfics girls would probably blush question their feelings and especially for Momo because most MHA fanfics used the past of Momo having no friends as an excuse to make her dumb and not realize the difference between the feelings of love and friendship however in this fanfic that particular instance shows that Momo picks the MC up for school because she considers him a friend while also being mature enough to differentiate between the feelings of love and friendship and her deciding who she wants to be with. My issues with it: I don't have some major issues with this fanfic but I'm gonna list some of them 1. I want the novel to add some of it's own plot to it instead of following the entire plot of MHA 2. I wanted the MC to use his resource realm more, he mostly uses it to extract DNAs, I wants him to be more creative with it and have some new abilities for him or pull out a noble phantasm or something. 3. I need some fight scenes for Hana and I also need some interactions between Hana and her friends who left her because she didn't had any quirk.

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KingBing96

This story is really great. I started reading it as a way to pass time but man this story sucked me in and is really good. Wish there were way more chapters so I can keep binge reading it.

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BenTennyson

I like your writing style. instead of skipping the child hood entirely, you did it with two years interval until he manifested his quirk. And add some attacks from the Naruto.

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Jay_Singh_7861

Everything in this novel is pure trash, there is just so many things that are dumb and unnecessary in this, I do not recommend.................................

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Digital_Ink

It’s an amazing story, different power given to the Mac than what we see in all of the other fan fics around. Don’t let the beginning discourage you, I know at first it sound like the MC gets some BS & OP powers but it’ actually a great story. The MC takes a different route than other stories. Honestly it’s refreshing to see this creative change. I also love the quick updates, it’s two chapters a day, and I still wish I could get more.

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Jimbai3870

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Ayslan_Gustavo

Very good, thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks

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ammie_kaneki

LOVE the idea and author is really good write and i love this fanfic so,. much that i'm waiting for notification of new chapter.......................

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EddyV

Love the way author write the story. Hope MC will not take a harem and stick with Fuyumi. Because from what I can see, Momo is a possibility, but don't give in to temptations.

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Monkey_is_hungry

This is probably gonna be one of my faforite fanfic beside the "that time I got reincarnated with a cheat" ................................................................................................................................

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Themasterblaster

Love the writing. You could use an editor to edit the mistakes in the chapters. Mostly are spelling mistakes but other than that it's good. I like how you use his powers in a variety way.

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Male_storm

Love the writing. I liked till I have read, and that's at the 16th chapter. Hope you don't drop this one. And also the birth parents, can you just kill them off? 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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Primus_Monarch

Thanks for taking it another level up until now. Hope you won't drop this like I did. 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇