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I'm promising interesting story a long the way, and I hope you enjoy it. Comment to let me know your thought, and rate the novel to support it. Have a nice day and good ride!
This novel is amazing n i would recommend this to every body as it is a gud read. I would say this is a must have in your correction n it really deserve a vote. Keep it up .
Oh wat a great story line. Really grateful to the writer for such such a wonderful line. Hope u will improve little more in your grammar Keep it up (fighting). Waiting for more update.
I love this book so much.It is really catching from the start to the end. I can't wait to read more. I would love to recommend this book to anyone. Keep it up!👍🏻
My friend recommended this book and indeed it has a catching start ,interesting character and overall a good story. Waiting for more updates ! Keep it up [img=recommend]
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Oh wow, I don't care if it's too early for a review, all I want to know is what happens next, Author please do you dare stop writing this masterpiece.. I think am falling in love 😍😍
Love the story so far. Read upto the 6th chapter. But I would suggest to keep the chapters a little shorter so that the audience can wait and wonder what shall happen next. Other than that, a great story.
I really like the world-building of this story. The character is also very interesting as well. I'll read more later. Keep up the great work.
Writing Quality (3) The writing quality has passion behind it to tell a unique story. Yet with this, there are still numerous grammar mistakes that can sometimes break my immersion in this story. Story Development (4) The story develops at a consistent pace as the characters explore this new world they find themselves trapped in. Character Design (5) The characters are a strong part of this story. There is a wide cast of characters with a variety of personalities. I hope as this story develops each character gets their moment to stand out. Initially, it was overwhelming with how many characters were introduced in this story but I believe that this large cast of characters will make for an interesting story moving forward. World Background (5) The mystery of the setting in this story is its most fascinating part. This world the characters find themselves in seems to hide some interesting secrets I can't wait to find out about. Overall this novel has an interesting setting, a brilliant premise, and a great cast of characters. The main thing that could be improved upon is the writing quality.
Good writing quality, interesting approach, and catchy title. The author sure does have a way of capturing you into their novel, and it’s a very interesting read as well!
The vivid language instantly transported me into the world, but there were several huge plot holes that didn’t make sense. I thought the premise of the story was brilliant. Author need to work on her writing style too much dialogues at a time. Try to focus on description. Overall, I still like the characters.
Story with a lot of promise, there wasn't isekai novel in a while that doesn't interesting as this story. I love this book especially the protagonist, Author need to write more. Looking forward to the world-building of this story. Exciting to see what going to happens.
It feels like home when you start reading it, beautifully written. The name of the protagonist is also amazing.....Best Wishes!
I really love this book Everything about this book,from the characters to the writing,it all good and i recommend it for everyone
Really love it. Such I a wonderful story line. One of best novel I ever read. It's really worth reading it. But hope you will update more.keep it up.
I think the story is shaping up to be really interesting and the author is off to a great start. I do think it suffers just a bit though from being oversaturated with characters in a single chapter sometimes and so it makes it hard to follow who's saying what at times. Some minor grammar issues as well, but overall, I can tell the passion is there. Keep it up!
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Author here, Yes, I just gave my book 5 stars, I hope you don't mind. And I just want to tell you that there will be a lot of changes in this story. It's because of my lack of writing skills and confidence, I'm sorry for that. But I promise you that the change won't affect the plot, or at least not in a major way. I can't promise you anything because this story didn't just affect you who read it, it also affected me who wrote it. It has been a few weeks now and writing this story has done me some good, I hope it does you too. Thanks for reading all the way here, once again sorry for the trouble, I hope it won't happen again in the future but I don't promise it because I always have to improve. Hope you have good luck and a nice day!