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Ms. Tycoon strike back-waiting for the Revenge
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Kiefer Samuel, a girl lived in countryside growing up with his mother, finds that she's actually the daughter of a wealthy family. Her father is Heaven Samuel who lives with another family in B town.
Kiefer is a talented girl who completed his study from the top medical university of the country M and also studied ancient medical practice.
Mean while, Davis White, heir of the white family business( white pharma Inc.) plans to start new venture with the help of new talent in medical field. while searching for these talent he came across Kiefer Samuel straight A student with medical knowledge of modern and ancient practice and setup a meeting for the venture agreement.
When he laid his eyes on Kiefer he got enchanted with Kiefer beauty.
Kiefer has long hair length till her waist, with blue eyes, height of 5"7' which attracted Davis towards her.
" I want us to start business in B town only" I said with full determination. Davis looked at me with confused look as he was planning to start it in town A.
"may I ask why"
"MY BUSINESS IN NOT FINISHED HERE YET and I'll appreciate if you keep my details in dark ".
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Heh heh....as it's my first novel... I'm giving myself 5 stars for the bravery. As a newbie in the writing world I just need support from my seniors 😇
The beginning is intriguing. The story itself seems to be slowly fluttering, it seems that the tangle of history is fluttering with difficulty. But starting from chapter 4, the story becomes more dynamic, emotions and confrontation appear, which makes the novel more interesting. It seems this story looks like a promising reading. It is interesting for her new delivered moments of great moments, and there is romance, although this is not my genre. I hope the author will pay detailed attention to ancient medicine. I wonder what is true? On the basis of what - such as Ayurveda, Persian healing medicine that used the beneficial properties of products, vegetables, fruits, berries, nuts, roots, foliage ... or Tibetan medicine ... acupuncture ... acupuncture in China ... knowledge of ancient physicians such as Amir Davlat Amasiatsy or Avicen ... knowledge of Latin doctors ... So far I have become interested in this short story and will include it in my library. Thank you to the author for the delivered moments of a wonderful text that gives new ideas for my short story. With appreciation
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The premise is nice, work on your grammar and punctuation and I'm sure your book is gonna do great. I'm also a noob but i left some paragraph comments, you should check it out. Good luck
I think the quality is fine for the first timer, till now the story is progressing at a good phase need to work on the grammar. But still making me curious...how the story will make progress
Nice story build up..need to work on little bit on elaboration...till now good work..kindly upload more chapters...its seems like there will be love triangle...lets see how story buildsup .....but for the first timer its a good start..
When I read the synopsis, I knew that I would like this story especially when medicine is involved. I assume that this is your first story and so far it’s quite good! I had to stop myself from reading so I could make this review. From where I stopped, I can’t wait to see the FL get her revenge. Writing Quality: There aren’t major flaws that affected the presentation however my only problem was the capitalization in the story. Stability of Updates: I’m not sure how frequent the author updates. Story Development: I don’t think I can say much about the story development since this story only has 16 chapters so far. But based on what I’ve read so far, the story’s heading into an interesting direction. Kudos to the author for their hard work!
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