Multiversal Apocalypse: Everybody Can Now Enter Fictional Worlds

LV 11

Spelloyal

I'll be honest, the idea is good and the fanfic is interesting, but the author doesn't know how to prioritize. He spent a huge amount of time detailing the MC's 3 years of training and trying to replicate One Piece's Rokushiki, rather than actually progressing the plot. If things continue at this pace, this will be a fanfic with over 1000 chapters, and we all know that it's rare for a fanfic to last that long without being dropped. Another problem is that the Apocalypse started too fast. Modern weapons are still dangerous to most people, and any criminal organization could easily be bombed by the military, the apocalypse should only have started when most people were immune to firearms and the above average could handle missiles, snipers and etc. I would understand the apocalypse if some kind of virus had spread and damaged the government's ability to respond, but in the current situation the military and perhaps the police force should be able to deal with the problem easily. Another thing that doesn't make sense is how the villains seem to be the only ones who've become strong, as they're running wild with no one other than the MC doing anything about it. This is not worm, where people are given powers at traumatic times, which encourages them to use them for evil. In the modern world, with everyone gaining powers, most should be on the side of the heroes, so it really doesn't make sense for society to be destroyed so quickly. Other than there really is nothing to gain by causing chaos like that, most people don't want to conquer or be a tyrant as it's more work than it's worth. I would understand a large number of crimes and robberies, but so many factions rushing to conquer cities and territories like warlords makes no sense.

LV 2

N0_Hope

Up until chapter 31 the story was really good but then we have a pathetic MC with dumb ideas. I just can't stand when an MC behaves like an absolute retard and even accepts garbage in his new " organisation " just for the fun of it... . not even people you trust but murderers that " changed their mind " ..... pathetic.

LV 4

jinmorifan_2

Interesting. Writing quality is good, and the concept is unique. Plus, atleast the MC has some common sense. Renewal Taekwondo ftw. Also, he atleast trains regularly, which is a plus side.

LV 1

Dary_Dary

I like the idea of ​​the story but I think this story goes the same way as many Chinese stories with similar ideas of a person from our world dying and going to another world where people can go to other worlds that in our world are fiction and only the protagonist of the story knows these worlds I find this story very interesting but it almost always happens from the protagonist is ridiculously OP honestly this makes the story very dull and the MC of this story is strong but he still can't be considered OP but as the story is just at the beginning he Being strong already removes the possibility of him going to some worlds that even not being dangerous or having strong characters have interesting powers, abilities or equipment simply because the MC There will be no need to use this kind of thing because it wouldn't be very useful for him honestly I think it would be much more interesting if the MC had to start from weaker worlds and starts Evolving from what he just starts in a world like one piece where almost all powers are very strong i really hope i'm wrong as i like these types of stories

LV 15

Killua_8376

very good and unique idee,the training arc is good written, but the story afterwards is just plain stupid,he makes a organization with very weak people which after about 2 seconds are his best friends and then he makes pretty stupid mistakes that where covered in his training so he seems just plain stupid

LV 5

SwordGod007

great story so far... I don't know if this is the original or a copy version but this is amazing... I like the concept of the multiversal system and how the story has progressed.... there are some grammatical inaccuracies and information mismatches here and there but overall it is good... I hope that you will publish more and more chapters quickly as I am eager to read them.

LV 13

LastWolf

I have t read this yet, it depends on wether only he knows about the mangas/worlds or everyone else to knows the stories❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓

LV 13

King_Raerae0

I was able to ignore a lot of things cuz it's a good story but the mc gets crippled out of nowhere lost a eye and arm by a random group and author said it's permanent when he goes to a world that can actually heal him I'm just hoping he gets healed after the mission cuz he should be able to by it there at least

LV 4

Gin_Loy

Great Fic man. I like the MC having his priorities straight. Keep up the great work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

Madara_Uchiha

Very Good................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

Wandering_Swordman

pls continue making mc power consistent and since mc already spend 3years in one piece i hope he stop making stupid mistake and will probably spend 5 years + in fairy tail, you can make mc learn contract magic or oath magic to make his member loyal, and get copy magic bro so he can copy Harry Potter magic,marvel magic, DC magic from his subordinate and enemies, too bad mc didn't pic it first he can copy time magic, crush magic and many more ,you can just make mc plan how to get dragon slayer magic or pic it later after he complete the mission

LV 4

POIX

Yes……………………………………………it’s good……………………………………….amazing even………………like its really good………………….:.….:::::…………..:::;:::::::::::::……………………………………………

LV 2

killiam115

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

LV 4

MKA

a good fanfic story with stable character development, the only badside is the writing that sometimes a little not readable. good job, naisu (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)

LV 2

Cesar117

Me encanta este fanfics, creo que tiene mucho potencial, como uno de los grandes de esta página, solo le falta desarrollar más a los personajes (en especial a los OC) y quizás incluir capítulos que expliquen más las motivaciones de otros personajes además del protagonistas (ejemplo; un capítulo de como fue el ataque a la ciudad desde la perspectiva de Mary, o uno sobre quienes son y porque causan destrucción el grupo de 5 alborotadores. Creo que si el autor hace eso la historia subira de nivel, quizás hasta sentirse como una obra totalmente original, ya que me gustó como el autor desarrollo el Arco de One Peace. También añadiré una posible motivación para los alborotadores con ejemplo. Si puedo añadir, creo que deberían de pensar de manera no convencional. En un mundo normal, donde digamos un soldado mal pagado, un policía corrupto, un estafador y un artista marcial hambriento de batalla, todos en un mundo normal tendrían poco impacto en la sociedad y quizás ni siquiera se atreverían a cometer delitos graves (matar, violar etc). Pero dales a esos potenciales (o ya hechos) criminales, lo que solo puede describirse desde la perspectiva de ese mundo como poderes divinos (ya que al no contar con sus historias de fondo y por tanto no conocer su potencial real y debilidades) la gente podría seguir sus verdaderos deseos sin restricciones, ya que creerían erróneamente que son especiales e invencibles. Digo, solo mira las propias frutas del diablo tipo logia en el mundo de One Peace. Para cualquiera que no haya visto el anime creerían erróneamente que sus usuarios son invencibles (inmunidad al daño físico, poderosos ataques elementales, etc.) Pero con solo ver unos pocos capítulos te das cuenta de que no solo usuarios de poderes más débiles e incluso casi inofensivos (genins con atributo agua, maestros agua, rayos, incluso humanos normales con camiones de bomberos rellenos con agua de mar) podrían incapacitarlos o matarlos casi instantáneamente.

LV 13

NOOB

This is a great story. The writing quality is good. The concept of the story is very insteresting, it is different from other multiverse fanfic. The MC is not dumb, his strenght is reasonable unlike other story that the MC is get overpower with no particular reason. He progress and learning from mistake. I love this story, I hope it will last and won't be drop.

LV 10

Ashura03

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LV 3

Mr_Compress

Has great potential