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Thaleus Cramo is an orphan with no abilities living in a world where the weak are discriminated against and the strong fight to get stronger. the human race almost brought to extinction by an alien race known as the Ragnor. The only thing ending a 100 year turmoil was ability users forcing the Ragnor to retreat and grow stronger. will Thaleus survive or will he be lost to the war to come.
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Despite having read this novel for like 5-6 times and being one of my favourites, I never gave a review so here’s mine. At first in the first 10 or so chapters there were a few grammar mistakes, but it began improving. There was a lot of information about the novel where it wasn’t overwhelming, but had enough to give us a general idea of the world or worlds. It gives us a bit of cliche thing where the mc belongs to a mysterious race where they were very powerful but for some reason died out or were hunted down or just rare. Though this doesn’t matter or impact the story, it’s just something that I thought I should point out. Only issue would be or rather was updating stability. Though I’m sure this shouldn’t be too much of am issue.
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So for those reading this book the MC seems to be growing fast, however he is still considered weak compared to how the entire story will be followed. Unfortunately I cant always keep up with releasing chapters due to real life issues. Im still working on how i want to develop my characters right now so they may seem abstract and i have yet to fully get into the history of the story. I know ive opened up a few questions in readers minds and i promise you these questions will be answered as i tie things into the story. Im working on fixing grammatical errors and such so if you notice anything feel free to let me know in a review so i can better my writing prowess. I'm hoping to get a contract opportunity so i can focus onnthis story even more. There's a lot i want to do with this story but sometimes i just wing it.