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Synopsis
Arano Haishōri is now the Tsuchikage, how will he lead Iwagakure?(Hidden Stone Village).
Finally Arano attained the position of Tsuchikage , but it is not the end of his struggle as new problems appear , will he get corrupt from all this power ? Will he sacrifice himself for the village or will he sacrifice the village for him?
WHAT TO EXPECT
-FIGHT
-DEATH
-POLITICS
-ANTIHERO MC
-BACKSTABBING
-A BIG CAT ON MY PROFILE PICTURE :D
*I added new characters so their might be some change in the timeline also not everything is cannon to the story.
*I'm rewriting some chapters if needed
-English is not my first language ( so there might be some errors )
-if you have some suggestion write them down in the comment.
Note : i don't own naruto , and i don't own the cover of my book.
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Write a reviewwell its a naruto ff wher the mc is the second tsuchikage so this means he is in the rock village and the mc has dust release. the timeline is around 2nd war. so far so good, too little chapter to properly assest and what i really like is that the mc is a kage there are too little Naruto FF where the is kage so i hope for more
Reveal SpoilerWell, the story is nice, a little confusing because the author made this an AU where the problem is that more explanations are needed to fill in the changes, but well honestly an interesting concept as a story and which hopefully will develop better to come, just hope it doesn't drop soon enough
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a story different from the others its good ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The overall story and idea is really good, however some work has to made on the quality of the writing and a bit on the progression. Firstly, the writing has little to no mistakes except for the lack of quotations. As for the story itself, it feels a lot like a summary, explanation, or retelling rather than telling the story from any specific point of view. Overall, it's a great story that only needs minor work on some writing skills.
Author CHUNKYCAT
Идея с деревней камня хороша, но то что начало фанфика уже ставит героя на самую вершину немного убивает интерес. Если бы герой тренировался с детства и показали бы его путь не воспоминаниями а подробно расписали это было бы гораздо лучше. Что еще на параноидальные меры секретности проектов? Да и чтоо за проекты7 не сказано. Стиль написания плох. Нет выделения кто говорит особенно в первых главах. Писть имя и фразу это низший уровень письма. Весь фанфик кажется весьма посредственным из-за этого. Но могу отметить что с битвами все очень даже не плохо... но это только один плюс помимо идеи фанфика, на гору минусов. Нужно переписать, замедлить темп и сделать нормальное развитие и тренировки героя. Да и еще и реформы проработать и сделать видным как они осуществляются, кем, это гораздо интереснее чем экзамен на чунина. он вообще мог бы пройти без участия Каге деревни.