Naruto: Let’s Destroy the Plot!

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Kil0

It’s bad. It’s chock full of chatGPT delirium. In the first few chapters his parents die randomly and he awakens 100000 bloodlines at once 🙄

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DetachedDreamer

The story was great til they killed off his family. besides the fact that its the most cliche start in fanfiction. im just bored of how uncreative it is at this point. Create a real catalyst with actual thought. poor kid has a family for like a total of 5 years in two lifetimes. Boring, and him showing so much affection to his family just feels forced now instead of natural after the fact. This is just another typical average fanfic with nothing special to keep it alive. I read all the way up to the present chapter and thats as far as I'll go.

LV 4

no_life

to many things that make me go wait hold up what why

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Rak

There is some wish fulfillment with this story, somehow mc was able to train in advanced chakra natures without fully mastering basics, then later act like a kid for an year even though he is super powerful (at least a jonin) i will only say one thing for now - Let him cook

LV 13

Joanjudo

I am writing this fic cause I am stuck and don’t know how to continue my demon slayer one, while the jjk is more difficult to write than I thought it would be. Either way in this story I am going and to try and improve on the things that I know were awful in my last one those being pacing and character interactions. I hope I will be able to do these characters justice and I will obviously give myself five stars since I am the author and it is a Webnovel tradition.