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Saving a young girl from dying was the last thing Jack expected to do today. Much less dying. And then he meets god.
What’s that? You forgot about me?
Hmm? It’s been nineteen hundred thousand years?
What?!! Humanity’s gone?
But I get to reincarnate as remuneration? Let’s go then!!
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A great story for some readers, it is very decent and barely has any grammar mistakes, depending on what youre looking for, this might either be the novel youre looking for or the novel you wont like at all. So heres my complaints. Theres no harem/romance, or at least it seems there wont be any, the MC seems to focus on his previous wife wich was reincarnated on another world. It already feels like the MC ignores his mother and is using everyone he meet/will meet to join his "inverted akatsuki" and using them just as a tool to go into dragonball Z world. And before the crying babies complain about me wanting a harem, what I want isnt exactly a harem, what I want is the character to live his new life, I was expecting him to help rebuild the uzimaki clan, maybe even adopt naruto because, lets face it, naruto as a kid, he went trought one of the worst childhoods someone could ever have and only started being happy after he had to steal a scroll. Like this, I also expect for him to try and help all others who suffer/will suffer, but only those that wont hurt him. Not only that, but I also wanted him to grown up, make friends and date a couple of girls. (he doesnt need to date them all) But now, it feels that everything will be skipped away just because the mc has a girl in another world... Well, some people dont like harem, others dont like OP characters. Personaly, I dont like the cliché "MC pursues X women no matter what right at the start of the story until the end". This cliché realy killed my mood to read this novel, because I already know the ending will be 2 endings. Ending 1- He gets strong enough and goes into his womans world, and after a bunch of chapters she is still single and after defeating the last boss that was to steal tha girl, they live happy ever after because of the cliché of them both reincarnating but still remaining loyal to each other. Ending 2- He returns goes to the womans world, and he founds out, that like normal people, she stayed single, but eventualy moved on and found someone else. Now, as much as I would like the ending 2, it would problably turn into a cliché of the girl regreting and missing the mc or the mc fighting for the girl and boom, girl dumps the dude to stay with the MC. Yeah, many will problably complain that im being unfair with my review, but then again, I wont care because a bloody church in naruto's world suddenly ruined this novel for me.
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rushed opness with an empty protag (side characters have more emotion an 'feel' more like people then the protag). many of the 'gifts' given too him seem to have been unlocked right after he was born yet the information given before his rebirth said many of them would be locked until he meets some requirements which included reaching certain levels as a ninja...the abused skill max ticket killed a lot of development along authors dream of a normal person in a few years actual making a combat style from nothing fighting only himself while having a toddlers body ruin much in the way of story character and plot development as he actual grows and makes use of the genius perks he had to grow overconfident only to be beaten by a clan raised kid or one with a active bloodline ability (eyes, mixed elements, unique bodies)..this type of plot lines would actual let him grow with emotions and not just a story that goes "ohh i know this world like the back of my hand and i got this system with these op perks that lets me do anything faster then others so i do not need to care about anything and noone would be able to teach me s**t and i am so powerful and smart i will just get out of any situation due to my system and thing i buy from it" after all madera and the zetsu are still active at this part of the story and he just goes running out the village at only false genin level (he does not have any real ninja training so he can not call himself a genin or even a ninja since he technically is just a normal citizen with lots of chakra)
I like the concept of how the story has developed so far. The main character is OP, but hey its a fanfic, its not supposed to be logical. If anyone has a problem with this story, please keep it to yourself. Keep up the good work with this story. And one last thing, I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL TAKE YOUR TIME IF YOU NEED IT, AND PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS!!!!!!!
Mc = kekkai genkai are like cheats so i don't need'em God = ( then why buy all those perks idiot )( ( it's good i forgot about him) MC = hypocritical mongrel
Author you ##*#$$$* Ok happy Spoiler included I don't know why you make like mc don't want to get cheat at first but still give him. For 8 ch. Mc is child and then he just sleep for 3 yr. Her mom which have no talent , suddenly become talented. You know after 3 yr. Don't say hard work here , I m talking about flow of story . Mc give chakra pill as he don't need them . If you don't need , why but in first place. You even in ch. 13 or so , say his all background story. Wtf , you remember it very early ___ so late Then her mom actual , is in dragon Ball world , reincarnated Means she should have cheat . When you go , you may even get a new father . And why so many reincarnation. Mc idiot actually author idiot , no sense of humour How many stories you read where boy reincarnate , mother reincarnate And I m getting feeling of ___ everyone else is a Returnee _____ novel don't know why Mc softy. Means in cold world bloody world he is softy Fuc. K you author You know these are small mistakes , but they actually got on my nerves. Don't know why And it actually feel like you want to b write a big novel but you lack content. You are showing baby mode , self story mode. slice of life mode , but others or growth of story zero. 4 yr old left home wtf He don't want cheat. So why make him so op that he want to leave his home If he want to hide why show his power to others Of he don't want cheat why take it from God. Author what you wanted to write Decide first You r very confused And I believe this is going for a hiatus. And will be dropped or paused by you So I will not way and gonna drop If someone don't like comment then can say &&& in comment on I don't read them , normally though. But , peace . Don't like ignored or just delete this comment .
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Loving the story so far. The only things I would say that needs a bit of work is the development between the protagonist and the world around him. The main changing his appearance for the sake of exploring other places. I would also prefer it if the protagonist took more time to develop the world around him without changing his appearence or exploring. I like the idea of the protagonist growing his relationship with his mother while he grows up instead of being instantly attached to her, it just makes their relationship seem rushed and pointless. But, if you exclude the before mentioned points it seems like a great start to the story. Keep up the good work.
Great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Few mistakes, long chapters, interesting setting and good language. Keep up the work! Hoping for more to come and am looking forward to the progress of this story. Ps. I love Naruto series <3
I don't know if I should've reviewed this cause it honestly isn't bad so writing a low rating review isn't fair but then again it's also so stupid sometimes that I think the story should have some retard alerts, like wtf already at ch3 we have him active a perk that gives him massive ammounts of chakra while he wanted to stay low key, at 3months old, with anbu outside watching him and his mother in the same room, while choosing not to level up his chakra control to max where he could've completely hidden his chakra That part almost made me drop this story
Wow!!! your my idol!!...please I want more chapters because its way more freaking awesome!!!...dont mind others commend.. but please idol iwant you make more chapters because i never want to miss!! that story that he want to become worlds strongest and that he can meet his lover in world of dragon ball Z and beat kaguya and others..meet naruto,sasuke and beat that hellish akatsuki clan but i got stuck up reading of your latest chapter 17 that he practice with vegeta.. but i want a chapter that he can go to school meet naruto and beat that oruchimaru... so thx a lot!! for you creating this novel... i recommend this!! and i will hope you to get the top100 like that i mean yes that so i recommend this!! haha so fun!.so idol! good bye!! hahaha!!
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I like where this story is going and I hope you keep on writing it .I would love for Naruto to still be the star and Hikaru to be a star (they can share the glory) but I wouldn't like it at all if Naruto just becomes a mere side character like inoichi in the original series and all the glory goes to Hikaru,i hope you read this and accept my requests . Thanks
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Man this is awesome I'm waiting for more, this is the first time reading something like this and it feels great. I'm happy that I got this application. Hay bro plz continue with the chapters foreword. Again this is too good 👍👍👍👍👍
As the author I can vouch for my writing, I think it’s pretty good. I make a few mistakes here and there but hey, who doesn’t? Read it, I’m sure you’ll enjoy. ;)
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We just need more update, and fast. But nah, just make sure story keep the flow,. So that its not become boring or suck. Dont make the main plot came so fast!!
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Got asked to rate it so here goes nothing. It's really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good.
Untill now it was more world building. I hope the action will start soon. He is in the same generation as Naruto right?(Hiruzen is Hokage,Kakashi is Jounin). If yes I Hope it will not be focused to much on the cannon(be in the Naruto team,help Naruto...) and put him in other team(Ino,Shikaru,Mc or maybe Guy,Tenten,Mc) but those are ideas in the end. Grammar is above averange. Good luck and hope it will not be dropped soon.
PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON' MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM BECAUSE IT WILL RUIN THE STORY IT'S LIKE OUT OF THE FLOW SO PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREME NOVEL THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR YOUR HARD WORK AND PLEASE LISTEN to my suggestion or advice THANK YOU PLEASE ALWAYS WORK HARD I SUPPORT YOU