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he die and get wishes I won't spoil this story also there will be many animes and movies and TV show verses in this story
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Write a reviewno problem is hard to see this kind of novel all in all good and please don't drop this like the other novel please
Writing Quality: The writing feels lacking, akin to a story penned by a young child. Even my 10-year-old nephew, who has begun writing his own novels out of his love for reading, exhibits better skills. try to use chatgpt to fix this writing it very easy. Stability of Updates: It's disappointing to wait a whole year for just 47 chapters. Story Development: The protagonist is overpowered from the start, leaving no room for development. Character Design: Like the story development, the character is overpowered with no growth or depth in design. World Background: The story relies heavily on pre-existing worlds, lacking originality or depth in world-building.
Reveal SpoilerAuthor omnioutergod
ok author i see that you are new to this but the story is going to fast and to make things worst is the there are alot of errors so i have to help you 1)when your write dont rush or the words will come out wrong 2)space our you words when writing and when someone is speaking 3)pronounce dont forget this it is very important for authors so i have a task for you and that is to rewrite all the chapters and make them more understandable i know you might get mad or get sad for having someone tell you the error you make but that is what viewers are for so dont take this the hard hard way plus you have views who are still interested in the story but that's all for now have a good day🤗😄😊😀