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It's a really really great story!!! I love how that MC is not strong from start, but from a long time (10 years??).. although he became OP after, but it's through a process ๐๐๐๐ Can't wait to see next chapter though.. Keep up the good work author san ๐๐๐๐๐๐
It pretty much a generic one piece novel with op mc just following the strawhats, getting to the island a little bit before them and beeting up the enemy. he is in the strawhats but techniqually isnt. The character is a good idea, but this may as well be one piece without the Plot and just mowing thru enemys left and right
If you want to read a Really good, like Really Really Good Written one-piece fanfiction than consider this fanfic "one-piece this bites" just search it up using that name and I promise you it will blow your sock off It, not an op mc, not a system, not a genius fighter, or anything. It about a guy that wishes to be in One piece than he appears in one piece but with his body like a normal body of a normal person on Earth which is super weak compare to the normal body of any person on One Piece, like one hit from Nami would knock him out for about Five minutes I don't know how to actually make a better synopsis than what is above but just give it a chance and read it, "one-piece this bites" will 100% not disappoint you
This would have been a great novel by itself instead of a fanfiction but tis is the path it went so i canโt be picky about it but itโs really good so great job.
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I thought it would be interesting because MC is not from the earth and so i thought.. But it turned out to be utter disappointment. Here MC is just travelling alone and authr nows for how many chapters he will and he just keep on bumping the enemys that luffy had to deal with and goes there before him and defeats them and not yhe language is utter boring i can say, it like listening the physics class in my college i don't even get interest in reading this novel as he keep on adding radom ****t to ghe content and its really boring.
Enjoyable as hell finally a OC one piece where I dont have to completely relive the whole one piece story all over again in an excruciatingly slow novel. However, this novel has a good enough pacing and a well structured MC that his powerful but still bot too OP and tbh his strength perfectly compliments the story written. I quite love the development of the MC and the FMC which is a nice addition to the main focus of the story. But overall I'd recommend it to any reader regardless of if they are a one piece fan.
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Love it and the character to but still like it to follow the main story a bit. But overall great story and will Always want more ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Its pretty good, the mc story doesn't start as op when he was younger but getting better as the story goes on to op. I like it how the mc romance is with one girl only, instead of a harem.
Man you got a fan.... I'm truly inspired and impress with your work From the starting.. Woh it was really unique and enjoying start... Wish he could cook to...it would be fun Well I'm truly enjoying the story... Thanks for writing a master piece...
Overall it is a good story. Only thing I have to say is that the Authur's height fetish is weird and irritating af. MC starts off 2m tall. Suddenly he is 4m tall. Then next chapter he is 4.5m tall. When is it going to end? Also non stop describing how large he is or how tall he is. One scene was describing Robin hugging his torso. Like wtf he 4.5m tall, how can she reach his torso when she is only up to his dick.
One of if not the best OC One piece fanfictions I've ever read. The mc has a solid backstory, and a consistent personality (which can be hard to find in fanfiction).
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Awesome, just awesome. Please update!!! Hope author-san is staying healthy!!!
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I think the most apt description would be boring. It just filled with too many unneccessary details that serve no purpose to story progression. It feels like author never tried to read his work, he would understand how tedious it is to read this fic if he did.
It's a really really great story!!! I love how that MC is not strong from start, but from a long time (10 years??).. although he became OP after, but it's through a process ๐๐๐๐ Can't wait to see next chapter though.. Keep up the good work author san ๐๐๐๐๐๐
It pretty much a generic one piece novel with op mc just following the strawhats, getting to the island a little bit before them and beeting up the enemy. he is in the strawhats but techniqually isnt. The character is a good idea, but this may as well be one piece without the Plot and just mowing thru enemys left and right
If you want to read a Really good, like Really Really Good Written one-piece fanfiction than consider this fanfic "one-piece this bites" just search it up using that name and I promise you it will blow your sock off It, not an op mc, not a system, not a genius fighter, or anything. It about a guy that wishes to be in One piece than he appears in one piece but with his body like a normal body of a normal person on Earth which is super weak compare to the normal body of any person on One Piece, like one hit from Nami would knock him out for about Five minutes I don't know how to actually make a better synopsis than what is above but just give it a chance and read it, "one-piece this bites" will 100% not disappoint you
This would have been a great novel by itself instead of a fanfiction but tis is the path it went so i canโt be picky about it but itโs really good so great job.
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Reveal Spoiler I thought it would be interesting because MC is not from the earth and so i thought.. But it turned out to be utter disappointment. Here MC is just travelling alone and authr nows for how many chapters he will and he just keep on bumping the enemys that luffy had to deal with and goes there before him and defeats them and not yhe language is utter boring i can say, it like listening the physics class in my college i don't even get interest in reading this novel as he keep on adding radom ****t to ghe content and its really boring.
Enjoyable as hell finally a OC one piece where I dont have to completely relive the whole one piece story all over again in an excruciatingly slow novel. However, this novel has a good enough pacing and a well structured MC that his powerful but still bot too OP and tbh his strength perfectly compliments the story written. I quite love the development of the MC and the FMC which is a nice addition to the main focus of the story. But overall I'd recommend it to any reader regardless of if they are a one piece fan.
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Love it and the character to but still like it to follow the main story a bit. But overall great story and will Always want more ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Its pretty good, the mc story doesn't start as op when he was younger but getting better as the story goes on to op. I like it how the mc romance is with one girl only, instead of a harem.
Man you got a fan.... I'm truly inspired and impress with your work From the starting.. Woh it was really unique and enjoying start... Wish he could cook to...it would be fun Well I'm truly enjoying the story... Thanks for writing a master piece...
Overall it is a good story. Only thing I have to say is that the Authur's height fetish is weird and irritating af. MC starts off 2m tall. Suddenly he is 4m tall. Then next chapter he is 4.5m tall. When is it going to end? Also non stop describing how large he is or how tall he is. One scene was describing Robin hugging his torso. Like wtf he 4.5m tall, how can she reach his torso when she is only up to his dick.
One of if not the best OC One piece fanfictions I've ever read. The mc has a solid backstory, and a consistent personality (which can be hard to find in fanfiction).
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Awesome, just awesome. Please update!!! Hope author-san is staying healthy!!!
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I think the most apt description would be boring. It just filled with too many unneccessary details that serve no purpose to story progression. It feels like author never tried to read his work, he would understand how tedious it is to read this fic if he did.