One piece: I can Repel Everything

LV 4

Celestial_Kaiser

Horrible grammar. The plot is okay-ish but grammar needs to be corrected.

LV 13

Stray99th

Another pick and go garbage. Author picks characters he wants in the mc's crew, and doesn't even bother to justify why they would want to join. >Mc comes >"Want to join me" >Character joinsNo thought put into this whatsover. I sugges having this retard's hands chopped off so he could never pollute the world with such garbage again.

LV 14

GuDaoistBigbro

i expected a read ...but a mtl Chinese novel iIget...

LV 4

Qwerttipper

This is an mtl translation rewrite. The author does not mention this, which is suspicious. Anyways, the mc is the same as cn version. Only practicing and female crewmates come to admire him. No changes but better grammar.

LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

I may be wrong but it's an LTM, the story as far as I read is nice and the plot is constantly advancing which is satisfying, it looks like the MC was able to destroy an island so I assume it will be strong

LV 13

DeathLingers

cant repel thots so already looking like a fake op mc

LV 4

Garland

The story is average at best. The plot is nothing new but has a lot of holes and grammar really needs to be fix. The main problem comes from the MC himself. He sprouts all kinds of nonsense in order to justify his actions and somehow other character believe it despite how ridiculous he sounds. Things just happen because it does and the mc really tries to justify it. From the formation of the crew, it turned into nothing more but just a harem. Their is no depth in the character, just power and women.Overall nothing but the usual self insert oc character who is strong for the sake of being steong and having many women join him without any good or believable reasons.

LV 13

killersoul

Plot wise it seems fine but more depth would be nice you could go into the thoughts of the people he recruits as well so the readers can better understand why they made their choices. The writing format needs fixing, the grammar needs work, and you could do better on word choice as well as using the correct gender pronouns.Character design is lacking for the main character because his thoughts and reasons for doing what he does aren't really explained nor his exact his strength and ability development level.Update stability remains to be seen ( I won't actually judge it before 100 chapters so I'll give an average score) World background is one piece since it's a fanfic and all so average score here as well

LV 1

razz_lee

I really try because it looks interesting, but most of the time all I do is try to understand what I just read

LV 4

HOLY_BOB

It’s great. And if it is Mtl can you give the name of the raw??

LV 1

NeaCambelt

Être dans one piec et ne pas rejoindre les mugiwaras quel preuve d'infériorité Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 4

_Ni_ck_

I was thinking and I want your opinion that they think about uploading chapters on Sundays on my part I can, no problem on my part so leave me your opinion here.

LV 2

Austin_Scott

The story is good but his spacing suck, if your listening to this Mr. writer please move the sentences closer together It really hard to read it like this.

LV 4

Lizrock

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The story is good, there are problems with the writing in the first chapters, but it seems that the author realized this and later on he solved it, the plot is easy to understand and there are few characters that can present a danger to the MC so he concentrates on creating a strong crew.

LV 5

Hollysummoapocaly

I like the amount of imagination you had to use his ability. It's great. Oh, I like what I did with the girls, not starting anything, but giving them time to meet the MC and fall in love alone.

LV 3

Life_sa_Beach_

Betrayal of the greatest degree ... expected to read a normal fanfic but got a Chinese MTL garbage, the plot is okay , but the way the story is written is just cringe , the reason I hate most MTL novels is their format , with arrogant characters screaming "Die for me " instead of just Die and the MC being too condescending and overconfident that he won't use most of his strength , and others calling themselves "This old man " , similar kind of phrases , which is just too annoying .Fix and edit a few things and you might have a good story

LV 4

agrayo5

I love the story, it has bad grammar but you can push through it.

Very good story the plot is concise in my opinion the mc is quite Op but not to the point of sweeping the floor with anyone this story deserves more attention hopefully the story continues to improve.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Spellbound_Jac

I like it. it's simple but good the grammar is bad, but the story is decent