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Synopsis
It about a Cultivator Who was killed by his friends and was reborn in one piece world.
One Piece is not mine and it's characters too.
The cover is also not mine.
English is my Fifth language so Sorry, I am bad at spelling. Enjoy
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The writing quality is ****: "he fell like he was flooding in water" "When he understands that he was fetus inside his mother's womb. " The story itself seems to be just a giant power wank. At the age of 5 he is already stronger than vice captains or so the story says. I haven't even fully read the first chapter and already hate it.
Mc has no personality, he is basically plot armor for luffy's crew. writing quality is poor - sentences are not properly structured , dialogue is messy.
Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs... Trash fic trash plot MC became plot armor for original MCs...
Promising and interesting story. Stable updates. From this story may come something good. But author spends too much time on useless filler arcs.
I only read a few chapters but i wanted to leave a review before abandonning this fanfiction. Good point: The idea is good and interesting (cultivator in one piece). I like the story's title (It attracted me here) Bad point: The grammar is bad. It follows too much the main plot of one piece (the MC isn't doing much). The plot is rushed and characters like the old man, i feel, were created for nothing. The main character isn't coherent, why did he cry when his mother died?! (I know you wrote a bunch of sentences in the story but it doesn't make sense as he is supposed to be a cultivator and he is supposed to at least be a bit more cold). For all the bad points, i won't continue to read this story, but still good luck.
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it only mostly follow Straw hat craw. It can be read so it's fine so welcome to one piece...…………………………………….. . …………………………………….. ………………………... …………………….
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I am One Piece fan. It's one of my best Anime easy going Mc. ... ... ........................................................m. .... ... .. .. ... ...
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Great story until now keep it up and if possible don’t drop it. I like the idea of a cultivator being reincarnated and getting foreign memories out of more or less an accident. That way we have cultivation and future knowledge of the world and I like it.
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I really like this story. Keep it up and do me a favour and don’t drop it like almost all fanfiction novels. I’m going to support you👍👍👍👍
For you who want to have MC that will become Lufy's Golden Finger then read this, and for you who like MC that have ambition then leave this because the MC basically Golden Finger for Luffy and his crew and seems lack of dream. It may or may not be author's wild dream to add more plot armor for Luffy and his crew. A good promotion to attract Fanboy to read i guess