One Piece: Uchiha Style

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Tobi_Obito_2

this is my second compte and i also agree with my first compte in idead from being shichibukai to befriend mihawk and shanks to hancock forlove to kage-kage no mi for devil fruit to territories choice when he become an emperor

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The_One_Above_You

well good story i want him to make the image of intel , calm and collective and kind , and like to fight the strongest people shichibukai first to build his fame slowly and then become an emperor and that needed territories so triller park is his base after cleaning it and turn it into a old japanese style castle with a big forest like garden with all beautifull trees and herbs especially salura tree with lakes and waterfall and hot springs for territories i said make it alabasta-fisherman island-derisserosa-water 7-amazon lily-wano (future) all of them are secret territories until the big war that doflamingo told tsuru about that will lead to chaos and mc can protect and manage all of them with 5 wood clones on each one of them and learn flying thunder god jutsu and leave a minato like special kunai in each and every island he visit and give one to the kings of his territories kobra ,neptune ,hancock , future shogan (after kaido and the current shogan get defeated ,rikko (dressirosa king) also he befriend both mihawk and shanks i mean come on the trio nicknames fit for badass and cool Shanks the Red Hair Mihawk Hawk Eye Tobi the Crow Kage-Kage no mi A.K.A shadow-shadow devil fruit and i suggested some techniques in last chapter commenters wish you good luck buddy don't rush things you should make the story slow don't move fast so you can have a long fanfic okay mc will do his own things don't middle with straw hats events let them be do your own events while also watching over them he can help them from time to time in the war between whitebeard pirates and marine both whitebeard and ace death is needed for ace is to motivate luffy ans bring sabo's memories back and get mera mera no mi to become stronger then whitebeard to stand down for young generation Tobi should be an ally with rebellion army help dragon cause to overthrow world gov he can give them intel or help them in their spy and help them enter some islands without being spouted by marine or world gov and help them collect materiels from weapons and supplies .....

LV 11

leo26

Just make sure you don't rush the plot and the fan fiction will turn out to be great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 10

BlazeNirvarna

Reall good so far character development is good but the world is a bit lacking but still great overall thanks for the chapters! ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)

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SushiKat

Nice, I agree with you Devil fruits aren't required. I SUGGEST USING Rinnegan to give your self 6 other bodies ( paths of pain ) as your crew, technically they are all you so its still "Solo". Love interest should be Hancock def Dont rush it, like so far your just doing your own thing which is good, pet StrawHats timeline progress naturally. And in the end, I would like to see travelling to a different anime world. So far really good to read. I can visualize everything while reading so you nailed it.

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AdrianVeidt

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LV 13

NAMI_SWAAAAAN

Not much to say, but if you love Naruto and One piece, you will love this novel.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

Pripriri

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LV 5

VinZa

I love this story, and I hope Author makes it a solo pirate. and for women, please don't hancock. very boring every OP fanfic, the woman is hancock. I hope to robin. MC x Robin <3

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ariq_setyo_adi

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LV 10

TurtleManiacc

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LV 4

JaxWolf4

Man, where do I even start with this novel. It is great and I am sad when I reach the end and have to wait for a new chapter. Great: Quick updates and is not dropped so far I like how you combined my two favorite series in a good way Long chapters that keep you engaged all the way through. When I say "Cons", it means that it isn't horrible, but these are the few things that I have problems with. I still like system novels, but there are sooo many of them. "Cons": The world background is a little bit lacking Feels very rushed due to the arc's being a chapter-long each It is a system novel Overall 4.8 stars, keep up the great work man.

LV 2

Inferno112

Good, noticed some grammar errors here and there so that can be improved with tools like Grammarly or proof-reading twice or thrice. besides that everything else is good (Note: me liking this story or not has nothing to do with the review, everything I voted is from my neutral POV )

LV 6

GGMissFortune

Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩 Absolute garbage 💩💩💩

LV 5

Evil_For_the_WIN

Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped? Is this dropped?

LV 4

Imperial_Fox

Too good, please continue updating. Too good, please continue updating. Too good, please continue updating. Too good, please continue updating. Too good, please continue updating. Too good, please continue updating.

LV 14

Link_Kokiri_Fan

The story is ok, it has a good premise but it needs some work both on grammar and sentence structure. There are also several inconsistencies but can be overlooked since they arent overly glaring. All in all, not the best story but still a good enough read to pass the time. Only exception is his interaction with Hancock, i wont say more because of spoilers but i personally felt the author dropped the ball there.