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Don’t mind me just putting a piece of my mind in here for the first time. Reincarnation of an otaku into the flash CW series as a speedster.
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If I have to be honest I would strongly recommend a rewrite. Author... you don't have a protagonist, but a walking to-do list, he doesn't have personality, emotions, qualities, flaws, nothing. What I see is an empty shell doing quests here and there like a monotonous RPG. What is his philosophy? What are his morals? What is his sense of identity? What does he think of the world? What does he value? I don't know, and I think my fellow readers don't either. It's not necessary to make the protagonist too complex or deep, but you should establish a personality that I can attach to, good or bad, it doesn't really matter, but it should be there! For now he looks like a botched AI roaming the Arrowverse and I don't think that's something to show us, but who knows? To summarize, your character is in dire need of character development!
not offensively bad but it's a pretty barebones story, dialogue is pretty awful/non existent. the biggest dialogue chain has been from the TV show and it's structured poorly. all in all seems like wish fulfillment or self insert stuff that will follow the show pretty closely. There are no characters personalities to speak of too btw. Chapters are short and everything moves at lightning speed. To summarise a waste of time. go author hope u get better but feels like u didnt'teven try to figure out how to write well
love this very much, Grammer is good, and story is great, I do hope he gets together with Caitlin and also the main big problem is that the chapters are far to short, and I can't wait for more chapters.
Honestly, chapter and way too short. my review of this fanfiction has more words than the actual fanfiction. it is not fleshed out at all and just seems to be nonsense. i love when new writes come in and give it a go. but this is obviously the guy not even spending ten minutes thinking about it.
must say this is pretty good stuff, please don't drop, there are not that many Flash fic up, so I'm glad this is up.
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chatgpt story I'm sure because it's ultra short, the lack of character dialogue is another good sign ^^ It's good to help authors but it's only that, you have to make an effort to lengthen the chapters, it's only a help.
the idea behind this fanfic was and is still used a lot but it's done quite well here,even though I can't write a proper review yet since there are not a lot of chapters yet
It's really good and interesting. Please continue your work. I would recommend reading it.
Really good and interesting so far and has continued to keep my interest piqued
Histoire passionate j'ai hâte de lire la suite et le mc et très intéressant et la façon do' l'histoire démontre la compréhension de l'univers
Great story with great potential! I can’t fault this story In any way it truly is an amazing stroy that showcases the authors good story telling. I look forward to reading even more of this story. Keep up the great work author
I liked the idea of the novel, but the chapters are too short, and I hope you don't drop them like the others. Thank you for the story. .