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Overpowered Godly System

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Author: DragonGod999x

3.71 (28 ratings)

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John is just one of your above average mc’s you can find just like any other he is addicted to anime and gaming.One day while he is done playing with his friends in one of his favorite internet cafe, while walking he saw a car about to hit his friend so he pushed him away and he got hit by car-kun, ‘ugh why did this happened I still want to live’. *Hello young one* he heard a voice calling him he opened his wyes wide he is in a room all white and a handsome man standing in front of him. ‘What happened to me’ he asked *you died,oh by the way I’m the supreme God nice to meet you* he thought excitedly ‘Am I going to be transmigrated or reincarnated?’ *Well what you’re thinking is............’ ——————————-
Hello guysss this is my first time doing a system fanfic related novel but I hope you will support me and you will like what I’m going to write for you all , Well I’m an author at wattpad but that’s different hehehehe btw support this thanks muwahahahahaha ~?~

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Mizrael222

Horrible book. This story does not deserve the ranking it has. The fact that this book is even in top 200 shows that you don't even need to have a good book to make it in a high place. This story feels like it's a fantasy for the author and self-inserted himself. All of the characters are bland, generic and full of cliché. The writing quality of it seems like someone **** down a paper then publicized it. Not even "This is only my 2nd language, so please bear with me here" would excuse the horrible quality that this story has. The only good thing about it is the Stability of Updates, as the author promised for 2-5 chapters a day (which is actually insane, and credit is given when credit is due). There is absolutely no story development at all, the character goes to an internet café, the main character then gets hit, meets god, then gets absolutely everything. Now that is the point of this story, so getting that op system is fine, but then everybody just wants to be his friend, girls want to be his wife for absolutely no reason. The universe literally bends over so it can please the main character, there is no reasoning provided at all for anything. As I said before, the character design feels bland, everything is forced, and does NOT represent what actual people would say: Ex: (oh my god mc is so cool kyaaaaa)... no. Nobody would do that, I feel like the only bit of realism that the author took was from anime and manga and did not put any actual realistic stuff in here. I would not put this review here if the story was ignored and not even in the top 1000 (It doesn't even deserve top 1000).

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Lolilovy

I’m reading in jail right now hehe

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PanKeRio

I will just point out The obvious This is not a story What do i mean by this? Stories have plot of any kind Somekind of scheming A plan going on Something A reader can think for himself Imagine what could happen later on Some information Why A character does what it does Is it simply their greed Some sort od bigger meaning Above only themselves? In this story All ive seen is mc going There and that way collecting and not getting enough If mc Has a reason i do not see it I mean wanting to have A harem or be The strongest is not a goal but A means of something due to something Lets say A mc was shown as always getting blame for being himself Most do not like him and call him names to put it gently Such A mc would lets say... adapt and force his personality to change He will know in his subconcious hes interior to most And thus make A goal for himself of proving them me himself wrong that Has better than that That he can be loved by others thus wanting to create A harem to be loved There is no such thing here I cannot call it even wish granting This feels more like this writer *Please take Note im not saying author* Is making his own fantasy where he wants to have fun be strong and kill weaker enemies Like using A cheat Code in A game cuz they cant do it fair Stories are supposed to do sth to the reader make him/her feel what The mc is feeling It try to understand The mc and its path Here? Once again nothing There is no reason other than Simple want me lust No better than an hungry animal Many things that could make this story work are omitted either of inadeqacy of the writer to convey something properly or maybe laziness Not sure The fights of this text are most common pattern villains from different genres Like A yandere Or wuxia But in this case its All talk 0 fight 0 excitement And mc executing the offender For "villains" There is no background For mc i would say barely anything if anything So characters are poor at best Story development ... There isnt one Ure using different worlds and adding what you The writer want and try to do sth with it When its not needed, pointless Just adds more characters that we know from their original works and not yours 0 change into them that is positive and your lack of knowledge just makes it worse If you were to write Instead of summoning Creating them It would be fine Just degraded copies But u summoned them thus heres your obligation to convey them as they are For The World? I dont know anything There is no content about it for me in this text that would give me some info about this world How it came to be What is different from other ones What happened to.make it different Why did something happened And thats just The basics Everything Has a reason and consequences In this story I see none No reason other than Pure animal instinct No consequences other than mc giving it to others And even then some are out of his doing but rather than getting what he deserves Has rewarded without A reason Without any consequence Thus writing is poor Grammar I can accept cuz seen worse and still understood most of what seemed mildly hoping to be interesting Thus slightly better with my opinion Lastly stability of updates 18 chapters in A Month Then some with big breaks Well not good If it were less Time between giving any reason might give better opinion about it But so far I think The writer Has Has enough of doing it Not like Has getting A penny for it Thus cant blame him if he were to drop it soon cuz he doesnt want to waste time or Has something better or more interesting to do Overall Not something i will ever come back to My personal preferences is complicated stuff Conceptual Psychlogical Maybe dramatic But First of All big Reasonal Like Time manipulation 3/4/5th dimensional beings The ideas The ingenuity needed to make Then work out Like touhou project Boundary manipulation Not expecting it ofc When plot is too much to ask

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