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A Guy with a BraunA Brain rhat actually works when There is need

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Replied to daniel_rahn
and that is just The tip imagine now this he willingly goes into genjutsu he willingly searched for something to angry him and Then when he got it hes shocked at what happened even though he knows its not real its Pure bullshit I can tolerate that power up afterall There is no use for that none at all he doesnt need it Simple as that and even when he got power its not like też gonna use it at all Well maybe on The side to get stronger if we go With The flow so far but that crap because I Honestly cannot call otherwise that you call a method of getting super sayian I cannot stand it it was that bad I do not want to say to anyone if something is crap I do it in A most delicate way if I do bother to write sth but damn this nonsense triggered me hard I did not hope for masterpiece content did not even think about good content just average was fine but this chapter in my opinion is at The bottom of it sadly ive seen worse but just to give you an idea author san I do not give any Chance to any book or author that writes shit like this I just quit and avoid it The only reason why I am writing this right now and not deleting this story yet is simply because I invested Time in this which ends right now I am not sorry if I offended you because right now I am offended myself because of what I read just now to put it Simple im pissed and you ruined my mood with whatever this is

ch 30 "Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

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Replied to Arthur_Ashborn
as it is I dont have much Time to begin with so when I do say something i try to say it in A way thats Simple to understand at least for me cutting it weirdly its rather me being honest and trying to say theres more but i dont have The Time i admit to being very bad at explaining and it takes A lot od Time for me to do so in A way others will understand sadly I dont have The Time and when I do write its always on phone in A minute of spare Time even what I wrote yesterday at least for me took much Time which could be used to sleep as it was almost morning but The only moment I Had to write which cut into my sleep Time Anyway if you find me offensive im sorry I will try to change how I write as for discord server why I am not joining? generally I dislike talking in communities and at best when I do want to support someone its only when I see potential when an author goes in The right direction but his/her work doesnt come out as good for such People I did create entire backgrounds setups history enviroment whole races with descriptions of what and why consequences of things to explain why something ia The way it is that were I to write it just on background alone it could be an original story on its own I did write my own books some years ago so I know how to do it and what to avoid to put it shortly I do know Many things too Many to put it at once without omitting something simply because theres too much to say and trying to at least say something right I guess thats it?
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Although it written good sadly its not a story for me too much harem members imo not enough Space to develop for other characters progress of the story too slow to my liking Lemons? while I dont have anything against Them I find that they are repetitive if There are New characters and Then I do not see any point to it due to how Many things you have to cover yet still adding more The daisy parts I did enjoy as they are more developed The plot Well it moves too slow as I said but The part with action like say The gang situation it is Too short in comparison There is a Long moment of nothing and Then A short of something to put it Simple and that is not enough and personally I do not like how The story goes later on simply not my personal taste as you do have some situations I dont want to even read about because I despises such situations I do not mean to say its bad or sth like that simply my personal views conflict with it or rather its against my personal beliefs of what is fine and what not example being forced into any kind of situation you do not want to be in which is not a consequence of your action simply put something that takes away your freedom of choice even if said choice is death me sth else its still A choice Anyway just wanted to paint my view A bit did I enjoy The story? it is a fine story not much to complain about unless you truly want to go into details but sadly I did not enjoy it as I did other stories
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