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PATH OF THE STAR HUNTER

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Author: cryzsalix

4.36 (16 ratings)

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Forced to face how vast and dangerous the universe really is, Desmond decides to seize the opportunity to gain the power he needs to protect what he loves, for his own world is far from safe. Traveling through various worlds, Desmond gathers treasures and powers, gradually discovering the dark secrets that lie behind the false tranquility.

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    Viduus
    LV 15 Badge

    So far from what I have read up to chapter 49, this story is above average. The mc is not perfect nor allowed his past problems to allow him to be evil. He is a flawed character, to which in life is more realistic than most stories i have read on here. I think being able to relate to a mc actions in a story is very impressive compared to most of the stories which are slanted in one way or the other to a very bad degree. The only small problem I have seen thus far is the author has a small problem with the "him" "her" flip flop sometimes. the author seems to have fixed most of it as of chapter 49.

    2yr
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    Pro_Dave

    Personally for me it is a near perfect novel. Reasons are 1. The smoothness of story progression 2. Characters - very realistic and well thought 3. Action scenes are nicely done 4. There is a strong sense of purpose in whatever actions the protagonist and side characters perform SPOILER BELOW For the author - I understand why the three energies can’t mix and fuse but desmond being so overwhelmingly talented can’t he use mana as the primary energy, ki or aura for body strengthing and lastly arcanum for the mind/soul. Please think about it dear author, once again absolutely love your work🔥

    2yr
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    DaoisttG3KuY

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    1yr
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    Prognastat

    I like the world so far as though it contains a few cliche elements it is combined in a way and with new ideas that make for an interesting setting and is probably the novel's strongest point. The characters so far have been pretty interesting though outside of a few core characters that are pretty interesting the side characters could be helped by being more distinct. So far the story is good. I wouldn't say amazing as hasn't gone anywhere deep so far, but good enough to keep me interested in how it will continue with some romance and actions. I would like to get some more intrigue and discovery related to MC, his ancestor etc blended with some story progression to elevate the story to a higher level. Now as for the only major downside is the writing quality. I suspect this is a translation rather than original work in English and pronouns are just an absolute mess. No he just him/her get messed up, but even those get messed up with I not infrequently which is a whole other level beyond even what I'm used to from rushed translations. It is even to the point where it can be distracting as I have to re-read paragraphs to figure out which pronouns were meant to be used to understand what the paragraph was supposed to mean.

    2yr
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    cryzsalix

    Come and judge me those authors who have not given themselves 5 stars, with that challenge issued; I would like to say that I really enjoy writing this novel so I hope that many people enjoy reading it. I am a novice writer so there are still things to improve, any comments will be appreciated.

    2yr
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    bignolte

    honestly this novel so far has been great Its actually really a fresh story with an interesting universe I just hope the other can keep moving forward with it I'm positive it will eventually grow in popularity so keep it up author👍

    1yr
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    M_pc
    LV 1 Badge

    Es una buena novela pero no la promocionaste bien. Deberias cambiar la portada. #################################################################################

    2yr
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    DhiJeneral

    Great story build up.Please don't stop writing this book and make sure to complete it. Even though English isn't the author's native language, he's trying his best. This is one of the best story here.

    2yr
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    Cristian_Halexys

    La novela solo va comenzando pero nuestra un estilo de escritura detallado en su narración, el protagonista muestra una personalidad cómica pero puede tomarse las cosas enserio cuando es necesario; hasta ahora la historia es interesante y mejora con forma mas avanza.

    2yr
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    Vishe
    LV 4 Badge

    Great novel, I have read till chapter 60 and it has been a wonderful experience. Other than minor grammatical errors (he/she),(his/her) this has been great for me. I sincerely hope that the author keeps up the good work and this novel gains more recognition.

    1yr
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    genelvo
    LV 12 Badge

    The overall flow and direction of the story isn't bad, with a little light hearted commentary spicing things up makes it a decent read. Unfortunately the Author has it he'll bent on repeating certain things such as how handsome masculine, or how great the Mc is with women. You will not have more then two chapters before this nonsense starts up again. Alas even all the characters we've been introduced to are female and basically throw themselves at the Mc. I personally do not like harems so this novel isn't for me.

    1yr
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    Caio_9705

    Author hás a fetish for having bis women being molested, kidnapped, forced plot and lost of drama! Loss of potential ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    1mth
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    Demon_6746

    Great novel ❣️....... ...... ..........

    3mth
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    Rei_Pernalonga

    I've read the first 49 chapters, and so far, I have nothing serious to complain about. The protagonist has a tragic past that adds depth to the character, providing an interesting path for development. The world where the story takes place offers many fascinating possibilities. The only thing I have to complain about is the changes in narrative perspective and when the author reveals something that will happen in the near future, only to later return to the present and describe how that thing happened. Both complaints are based on my opinion, and others may find them positive. I hope the author continues writing this novel and improves more and more.

    3mth
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    SPECTRALE

    the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao ..................... ..................... ............... ......

    1yr
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    NeonGenesiss

    This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .

    1yr
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