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Since childhood Wyatt has always followed the advice of the adults around him. Study hard! get a good job! honestly not bad advice the problem is that's all he has ever done.
In the year 2200 the first immersive full-body VR system is being released and with it comes the insanely hyped MMORPG Primal Online. With everything, someone could ever want from a fantasy game, it's no surprise when it takes the world by storm.
Never taking any time for hobbies or interests Wyatt's life has quickly fallen into a constant loop of mundane boredom waiting to be broken. This all changes one day when his cousin invites him to try this new game during a family get-together.
It doesn't take long for a spark of interest to emerge.
Disclaimer: This is my first novel as well as where I plan to simply practice writing to get more comfortable so I don't know how detailed or active it will be.
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While the grammar and presentation have massive issues, this story shows potential. While the premise is nothing too original, with how much effort the author is putting on making new chapters, I wouldn't be surprised if this novel became famous. Continue with your hard work author! And if you can, please try to find a proofreader.
An easy to follow novel with a good mix of interesting characters. The detail in the action scenes really help to bring it to life while the story progression flows quite naturally, I suggest reviewing chapters before release but besides that good job
This story is so detailed and intriguing, it sticks you like a glue and not tiring to read, and also the mc is a unique character...love it. Keep up the good work author
Man! I gotta say this takes me back to when I played my first MMORPG. It brings back memories. The writing could be a lot better, maybe the author could edit some of the earlier chapters because from my observation it does get better. The characters are fun and lively, but my fav chapter so far is Chapter 4. Keep it up man!
Although the grammar in the earlier chapters could use some reviewing, overall an easy to follow novel with interesting interactions between characters. the length of chapters and events within the story also fit well.
Hey there~ Read the first 5 chapters so far and the main thing that stood out was that the novel is easy on the eyes, good dialogue and pacing = effortless read. I also want to add that putting an ingame system into words can be tough at times, but you have made it neat and easy to understand. Good Job m8
First thing first, Love the originality of the characters, it's really fun to read the interaction between them. Second thing, the writing style of the author is so descriptive that it almost gives me a vivid image of what's happening. Third thing, the world is pretty good, and it might look like every other plot but I believe the author's imagination and looking at the very development of the story that it's going to be an interesting read. At last. Keep up the good work author.
Really captivating plot. I really love your writing style. Reviewing after reading 20 chapters so far and will keep reading. Keep up the good work.
The idea the story is based on is very interesting, and since I've read other novels with similar storylines, I can understand this better. The conversations are not awkward, unlike what I see in many other novels, while the length of each event is near perfect. One advice I would offer is to utilize more descriptive writing and review the grammar. Other than that, it's honestly a great read.
This is a high quality story in the making, at the time of review there are 28 chapters that I have read. It was a very addictive read for me, making it very hard to drop. If anything I just want more chapters now that I've caught up. However I don't want the author to get burn out. Ill start off with writing quality, the quality is really good allowing for the flow of chapters into one another be seamless. Another great thing about the writing quality is the level of terminology used when describing action scenes or fights. It was quite impressive to read through. The descriptions for not only the characters but the world is really well handled giving you the image for the scene and the characters that is about to emerge. The update frequency is maddening in my opinion for the level of work the author put into each chapter, On time of review, as I was writing another chapter dropped safe to say I'm reading that after I'm done my review here. The development of the story is really well handled and developed with great detail, the author loves to leave hints and plot seeds everywhere in his chapters. Often leaving me to keep reading to see how those develop. The events that occur in the story are handled really well adding tension and stakes to the story when needed. The author has a talent for writing believable characters, making them feel really three dimensional in the process. The characters the author focuses on, all have their own quirks, traits, personalities and aspiration's. Making it all the more enjoyable reading through the introduction of these characters. My absolute favorite's being the twins in the later chapters. The background of the world is really well developed and delivered well alongside the overall plot of the story, the author includes history of the world going back hundreds of years. Setting up some good foundational depth from this in the process. Alongside this follow well described functions within the world as well, fleshing out even more of the overall background. I strongly recommend people to give this story a try after the first couple chapters you will be hooked, especially with how the author manages to keep the readers attention throughout each chapter. I found this a really enjoyable to binge through and it was a night well spent. You have an amazing story on your hands Quasy, Ill be following along keep up the great work, but don't burn yourself out either, especially with your update frequency. Now if you will excuse me I'm going to read the latest chapter that dropped ;D.
The grammar needs some help and at first I thought that it was going to be an SAO copy but it is actually pretty good. Try reading other novels to improve on grammar.
The novel beautifully captures the essence of MMORPG games, with its complex gameplay mechanics and detailed world-building. The author has done an exceptional job of creating an enthralling story, with a well-crafted plot that keeps readers hooked from the very beginning.
I been sleeping on this novel for awhile now I am glad I gave it a chance, and to my surprise this is a fantastic novel and the author writing is pretty good, easy to read and just quick spoiler the mc is not a sword nor spear user 😌!!! Dis novel deserve more recognition so plz Give this novel a try u won’t regret it