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Percy leaves camp when his friends, the seven and the whole camp including Annabeth gravitate
towards his stuck-up cousin. He is betrayed by everyone including
his father. During his isolation he meets goddesses of the hunt and snow can they cure his
frozen heart?
P:S: This is my first story, not a chaos army or prince of the universe story, that's too overused.
P.S: I personally tagged it overpowered I don't want any insults
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Ok, I just got another review that I bash characters a lot. Well, it's my book, if youre not reading and liking it, don't read. And I wrote this book for fun, what's bad with having a little fun with what's mine. If you want to read a book, at least read the reviews first. And y'all should realize you're not the only Percy Jackson fans out there. What's a fanfiction? if you can tell me, I wanna know please. People like you guys can't survive on Wattpad reading Percy Jackson fanfictions, you might just get madder lol. it's my book pls, I do whatever I want with it. Why do Naruto fans bash Sakura a lot? They don't like her, simple. That's all for my rant. Thank you all I'm trying to say is... F?
Everyone has the freedom to review but when u put something I didn't do and you tell me as if you're the only right person in the world, It gets very annoying . Good or bad reviews are appreciated at least I see reviews. You hate character bashing? Don't read and or read and review so you can chase the ones who hate it with you. You hate edginess? don't read, though I still don't see the edginess, well probably because Im the writer and I'm biased lol. But you can give this story a chance, you won't be disappointed, I'll explain all in due time. And for those still reading even with all these, thanks for that. If you don't like what I mentioned above, pls don't read Percy Jackson fanfictions on Wattpad because that's all you'll see there, we the Percy Jackson Wattpad lovers have seen so many books like this, that we've gotten used to it lol. Take it from a well-intentioned person, cos u might just run mad lol and no one will mind you. Thanks. PS: and please if you review and your review disappears, I didn't delete it, think back and recall whether you added swear words. Don't review bs when that happens, I'll hit back at you the same way.
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The fanfic is pretty mediocre. Grammar is all over the place - I'd recommend the free trial of Grammarly - and the characters don't feel real or fleshed out at all. All of Percy's friends turn their backs on him because of the lamest reason and Percy isn't the Percy I grew up reading about - he's an imitation that's sorely lacking. The idea for the fanfic is fine, I just think the author needs to sort out their grammar and decide on a more feasible plot line. I understand writing things for fun - just look at my novels and you'll see I did it a lot - but that doesn't mean you get a free pass from criticism. Take it from me, I've had my fair share of it.
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Pretty good story, the only letdown is writing quality, some parts are hard to understand due to word choice, flow can be interrupted because of bad sentence structure, and improper use of grammar
Great novel ive always liked poj but u are one of the vey few people who make a fan fictions for it.So plz dont drop this and hatrrs be gone like the thots u are.
this is a pretty good novel, love what your doing with it and thw divinitys he got suit him perfectly, but you should have him visit his mom and step father I'm sure they will be worried about him and also your should bring them to his Domain
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Please before you read this book, check the tags. I didn't put it as revenge or action, this is just a random book, it has no actual plot... but wait, does it? π€, now even I am confused. So I don't even know what I'm writing. Confused Author ππ