I barely understand the fiction at all. I mean, this has to be one of the worst writing qualities I saw, in grammar or coherency.
Dialogue is flat.
No good description or fleshing out of characters.
No purpose.
All it is so far is a high school boy creeped out by a loli who fell from the sky.
*pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head* *pats authors head*
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