Synopsis
In a far-off land filled with magic and wonder, there lived a young man named Xander. Xander was an orphan who had grown up on the streets, fighting for survival every day. But what set him apart from other street rats was his incredible power. Xander had the ability to control the elements, summon powerful creatures, and move at incredible speeds. He was a true master of the arcane arts, and he knew it.
Xander had always kept his powers hidden, fearing the attention they might bring him. But one day, while on a routine mission to retrieve a lost artifact, he found himself caught up in a battle against a horde of undead creatures. The other members of his party were quickly overwhelmed, but Xander remained cool and collected, unleashing a barrage of powerful spells that decimated the enemy forces.
From that moment on, Xander became known as the most powerful mage in the land.
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Write a reviewOk, it's great and worth giving a try. Based on Adventures, it'll perhaps give off the feeling of playing those old school rpg games as you read it. It's just a little streched but that's not much. You'll still enjoy reading it if you liked those Old RPGs. But hey what happened around the end of Chapter 2? it seems like you skipped a major part🤔
The plot is good and interesting, a pretty nice fun read there were some grammatical errors and ch was a little short, but these issues can be easily fixed Keep up the good work, author.
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Not my cup of tea.. It's predictable, the pacing a little top fast and grammar is readable. but other than that it's pretty mah I guess. some might like this, but I probably won't read it unless the pacing slowed down. Ain't no way someone can open up to another person so quick like in chap 1. especially if they've been alone and surviving by themselves for so long.. n what's the point of surrounding a sleeping man when you can just kill them :v
Reveal SpoilerInteresting story. Although it seems light, but enough to make me curious. The plot is interesting, even some chapters also have interesting scenes and make me curious. (Although I forgot which chapter it was in 😅) After all, as long as it can make the reader curious, that's more than enough. good job, authors.
a fluid story without obstacles, good narration, good action scenes and an easy to understand plot. It has many good points and in general it is a satisfactory read, as advice I would like a little more description in the environment and that a little more be known about the levels of power within the book, at least to know how strong the character is protagonist at the current point of the story compared to average warriors
The plot is good with some grammatical errors the length isn't too long but it has potential. I recommend rechecking what you wrote before actually publishing The overall story is promising...
Awesome!!! The plotting seems quite amazing. Much to say it's an intriguing book with chapters yet to be uploaded. Even with the little chaps the author had managed to bring out it really good. Nice approach with it author~ Keep up the good work 💪😸
A classic action/adventure story with a lone hero! The monsters are unique (The Atlantis chapter) and the dialogues are crisp. As of 7 chapters, the author seems to be building the world - with treasures, parties & dragons. I am excited to see what more the author has in store. Are Xander and Sophie going to end up together? What are the stone's true powers? Will the party Xander meets in Chapter 7 come back again? WIll Xander adopt Lillia? It will be interesting to also see Xander get used to other people are him.
It was a nice read, good plot and i really enjoyed your book. Nicework here author i hope to see more chapters
It was a great read, but i did not enjoyed enough of the character build . grammar was nicely done but the paragraph are lengthy. rest i already did gave the overall ranking i hope you keep up with the update rate
Author lucifurge
This is a very cute fantasy slash adventure kinda story. I thought the main character was rather mature and wholesome despite his circumstances with a sense of humour. Overall this was a fun read, highly recommended for guys and girls alike. Keep writing author!