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This is a review of the first seven chapters. The writing style is strange; there line breaks in the middle of sentences. However, there are no other grievous grammar mistakes. The personality of the main character doesn’t come through even though the author uses first person narrative for most of the chapters. The secondary characters are similar blank. After seven chapters the reader doesn’t know why the main character is in the water or why the main character is hated.